SandyWhitlock
Experienced
- Joined
- Sep 21, 2020
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Hello everyone! I am new to this site and new to writing. I am doing this for fun and not expecting to become such a great writer but I still would like it to be well written enough for some people to enjoy it.
I started posting my first story. The first 5 parts I posted together. I didn't want my submissions to be too short but now I'm wondering if it is too long. It also has a lot going on in it. I kind of wish you could have stories in multiple categories.
I know I made a mistake with my tags. I had thought I put all the appropriate tags but I was annoyed with myself when I saw I didn't. My story overall has MF MM and MMF. I left out the tags where it would indicate it would have mm and mmf in it. I've already put a submission to change it but it hasn't gone through. I can unserstand people getting pissed thinking it's one thing but then it's also another thing that might have made them stay away from it. I don't want to come off as deceptive.
The other parts I put out are in smaller groups.
The most recent part, which is only one part, I published is getting the lowest votes and got a comment saying I made a shitty story from a gay one to a loving wives one.
I'm looking for any insights you are willing to comment on. Is it a down right shitty story? Is my grammar too horrible to enjoy the story? Going forward when I post a multiple part story should I post one at a time no matter the length? Should I stick to one subject/kink/category instead of incorporating multiple ones? Also anything you can think of.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5606381&page=submissions
Thank you so much!
I started posting my first story. The first 5 parts I posted together. I didn't want my submissions to be too short but now I'm wondering if it is too long. It also has a lot going on in it. I kind of wish you could have stories in multiple categories.
I know I made a mistake with my tags. I had thought I put all the appropriate tags but I was annoyed with myself when I saw I didn't. My story overall has MF MM and MMF. I left out the tags where it would indicate it would have mm and mmf in it. I've already put a submission to change it but it hasn't gone through. I can unserstand people getting pissed thinking it's one thing but then it's also another thing that might have made them stay away from it. I don't want to come off as deceptive.
The other parts I put out are in smaller groups.
The most recent part, which is only one part, I published is getting the lowest votes and got a comment saying I made a shitty story from a gay one to a loving wives one.
I'm looking for any insights you are willing to comment on. Is it a down right shitty story? Is my grammar too horrible to enjoy the story? Going forward when I post a multiple part story should I post one at a time no matter the length? Should I stick to one subject/kink/category instead of incorporating multiple ones? Also anything you can think of.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5606381&page=submissions
Thank you so much!
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