Du Lac
Literotica Guru
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Sunday Reviews Part II
Sorry guys..got home and hit the hay.. so I had to finish this morning....
Next a Kabuki of rhetoric that stuns us!
Mou oshimai da Tathagata
Quote:
In my palm
my offering
melts,
gone with a breath
like a dream of you
This is a dreamy open love poem that as Jim says sways in the ancient form. I loved it! Peaceful, floating. Tath.. no worries on the kid comment! Children are the wise ones... they teach on a greater level and are open honest and closer to the divine essence..
An Allemande:
Verbotan Sabina_Tolchovsky
Filled with desire passion and fire. I really liked this stanza:
Tie me,
spank me,
slip it in slow and hot
Please,
touch me in all those dark, secret and trembling spots.
Chicken dancing into the poetry lime light is :
Zen Fun Bill Dada
A whitty two liner that made me smile and giggle. I love the short spurts from this poet! Look for more!
Finally one I found dark, light, filled with truth...
a minuet of living in addiction..
For T JPX
While the form is a little confusing I still loved this work.. the honesty here is strong and a light is revealed on the curse of addiction...and always seeking more in the clouds and rain......
ty
Du Lac
Thank you all for the slam dance of reads.. sorry late with the final reviews.. but a girl has to sleep when she is working two jobs lol... hope you all have a poetic day!
Du Lac
Sorry guys..got home and hit the hay.. so I had to finish this morning....
Next a Kabuki of rhetoric that stuns us!
Mou oshimai da Tathagata
Quote:
In my palm
my offering
melts,
gone with a breath
like a dream of you
This is a dreamy open love poem that as Jim says sways in the ancient form. I loved it! Peaceful, floating. Tath.. no worries on the kid comment! Children are the wise ones... they teach on a greater level and are open honest and closer to the divine essence..
An Allemande:
Verbotan Sabina_Tolchovsky
Filled with desire passion and fire. I really liked this stanza:
Tie me,
spank me,
slip it in slow and hot
Please,
touch me in all those dark, secret and trembling spots.
Chicken dancing into the poetry lime light is :
Zen Fun Bill Dada
A whitty two liner that made me smile and giggle. I love the short spurts from this poet! Look for more!
Finally one I found dark, light, filled with truth...
a minuet of living in addiction..
For T JPX
While the form is a little confusing I still loved this work.. the honesty here is strong and a light is revealed on the curse of addiction...and always seeking more in the clouds and rain......
ty
Du Lac
Thank you all for the slam dance of reads.. sorry late with the final reviews.. but a girl has to sleep when she is working two jobs lol... hope you all have a poetic day!
Du Lac