Looking for editor feedback

Midcon

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Hi everyone,

At the insistence of a female friend who I write for I'd like some suggestions regarding a story I have written, with the intention of having it published here.

Briefly, it's a story about 2 people who meet on a train trip in Canada, fall for each other and have some very hot and passionate times. The sex is fairly straight forward, blindfolds and light bondage is as kinky as it gets. The word count is just shy of 8200.

I've read the recommendations and story writing help sections on Literotica, but I'd love some feedback prior to submitting it.

Please PM me if you're interested

Best regards

Cris
 
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