Haulover
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I'm a new writer here in LitE. I'm not new to writing, though, and have been published in mainstream hard copy fiction - though it was a long time ago. (22 years 
). So I'm pretty rusty, and the short-form of the stories on LitE is new to me.
I'm writing a 3-part story, to be posted in Loving Wives (unless you think it belongs somewhere else.) Part 1 is complete and needs a second set of eyes.
If you're available, I'd appreciate your help. I have been an editor myself here on LitE, but editing my own work is hardly the same as editing someone else's work.
I'd appreciate input on:
- Structure
- Pacing
- Overall readability
- Overlooked opportunities to spice up the story line
- Any logical slip-ups or gaffs in the story line
- Detailed edits - i.e. grammar, sentence structure, etc.
PM me here on LitE, and we can exchange contact details.
Many Thanks!
). So I'm pretty rusty, and the short-form of the stories on LitE is new to me.I'm writing a 3-part story, to be posted in Loving Wives (unless you think it belongs somewhere else.) Part 1 is complete and needs a second set of eyes.
If you're available, I'd appreciate your help. I have been an editor myself here on LitE, but editing my own work is hardly the same as editing someone else's work.
I'd appreciate input on:
- Structure
- Pacing
- Overall readability
- Overlooked opportunities to spice up the story line
- Any logical slip-ups or gaffs in the story line
- Detailed edits - i.e. grammar, sentence structure, etc.
PM me here on LitE, and we can exchange contact details.
Many Thanks!
