scbolder
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I am currently working on part 2 and would love some feedback and tips moving forward. I know there are a few typos that I missed in editing, so no need to point those out. I am more looking for people's take away as to the amount of sex to plot ratio, the flow and timing, etc. Basically, the structure of the chapter. Not to be crude, but is there enough sex to get people off? Would you like more plot in a chapter? Or any other ideas you may have.
Thank you!
(It is a pretty vanilla story, with only some very mild rough sex and dirty talk).
https://www.literotica.com/s/premonitions-senior-year-ch-01
Thank you!
(It is a pretty vanilla story, with only some very mild rough sex and dirty talk).
https://www.literotica.com/s/premonitions-senior-year-ch-01