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On 9/7, I rewatched a porn video, the ending of the Italian porn film “La Sposa” (”The Bride”) starring Erica (or Erika) Bella.
A little later, I sent a link to the video to my friend TM and added:
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I really like the idea of two family members feeling some passion for each other, they are waiting for something, they do something minor and then they can't stop doing more and more. Maybe a brother and sister have spent some time together and are starting to feel some interest in each other. The sister is waiting for someone to pick her up. Her boyfriend she's thinking of breaking up with? As the brother and sister are waiting, they do something minor, then they do more, they do more, and he winds up fucking her.
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At this point in the development process, the story starts “crystallizing”. I add in my head a bunch of ideas to the bones of the story idea. What job should Matt have? Drama therapist. Why not?
It's sort of like making soup from what's in my refrigerator and pantry. I start grabbing stuff, and if it seems okay, I add it in. So I wanted Matt and Erica to talk about something interesting, I went to my "Interesting things to discuss" shelf in my mental pantry, and I pulled out the unaffordability of starter homes. Hey, that will probably work.
The next day, I wrote TM some more thoughts the story:
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It's Thanksgiving. Back in March, the mom thought her son and daughter each would be bringing a potential fiancee to her house for Thanksgiving, so she invited the two sets of aunts and uncles to Thanksgiving to meet them future family members. The brother has broken up with his girlfriend by the time Thanksgiving rolls around. The sister's boyfriend drops her off and then heads off to his parents for the weekend. The sister's relationship with her boyfriend is shaky. Over the weekend, the brother and sister talk a lot about their relationships. At the end, the brother and sister are alone in the house. She's waiting for her boyfriend to pick her up. The brother has figured out what buttons to press to get his sister excited, and he starts pressing them. They have a make out session like in the video I sent you and wind up fucking. I should write some of it down and send it to you.
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I always have almost all of the plot of the story mapped out in my head before I start writing. I don’t write a story outline. The story I’m envisioning has to have me excited before I’ll fire up Scrivener (the program I use to write stories) and starting typing away. This story had me very excited, and, the next day, I sent TM the first scene.
I was writing the story and making good progress when I get a PM from a reader. It pointed out in one of my stories I have “slide” when I should have “slid”. And then it had:
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P.S. - just a minor request you can disregard: how about a female with regular (B) sized boobs that she considers way too small but he loves them and they are ultra sensitive and she can cum with him playing with them?
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I felt that worked perfect for the sex scene in this story.
Originally, the sister’s name was Hailey and Ryan was the woman Matt just broke up with. A beta-reader said he didn’t like female characters with names he considered male. I decided to make the sister Erica and Matt’s ex Hailey. It was my intention from the beginning for the female character to be dressed as much as possible as Ms. Bella was in the porn video with a white dress similar to a wedding dress. When I did the name change, I decided to make the sister as like Erica Bella as possible. I changed her looks to match Ms. Bella’s. But of course, my Erica wouldn’t have Ms. Bella’s large tits. I didn’t use any of the action from the porn video as it didn’t match the circumstances of my story.
A little later, I sent a link to the video to my friend TM and added:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I really like the idea of two family members feeling some passion for each other, they are waiting for something, they do something minor and then they can't stop doing more and more. Maybe a brother and sister have spent some time together and are starting to feel some interest in each other. The sister is waiting for someone to pick her up. Her boyfriend she's thinking of breaking up with? As the brother and sister are waiting, they do something minor, then they do more, they do more, and he winds up fucking her.
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
At this point in the development process, the story starts “crystallizing”. I add in my head a bunch of ideas to the bones of the story idea. What job should Matt have? Drama therapist. Why not?
It's sort of like making soup from what's in my refrigerator and pantry. I start grabbing stuff, and if it seems okay, I add it in. So I wanted Matt and Erica to talk about something interesting, I went to my "Interesting things to discuss" shelf in my mental pantry, and I pulled out the unaffordability of starter homes. Hey, that will probably work.
The next day, I wrote TM some more thoughts the story:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
It's Thanksgiving. Back in March, the mom thought her son and daughter each would be bringing a potential fiancee to her house for Thanksgiving, so she invited the two sets of aunts and uncles to Thanksgiving to meet them future family members. The brother has broken up with his girlfriend by the time Thanksgiving rolls around. The sister's boyfriend drops her off and then heads off to his parents for the weekend. The sister's relationship with her boyfriend is shaky. Over the weekend, the brother and sister talk a lot about their relationships. At the end, the brother and sister are alone in the house. She's waiting for her boyfriend to pick her up. The brother has figured out what buttons to press to get his sister excited, and he starts pressing them. They have a make out session like in the video I sent you and wind up fucking. I should write some of it down and send it to you.
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
I always have almost all of the plot of the story mapped out in my head before I start writing. I don’t write a story outline. The story I’m envisioning has to have me excited before I’ll fire up Scrivener (the program I use to write stories) and starting typing away. This story had me very excited, and, the next day, I sent TM the first scene.
I was writing the story and making good progress when I get a PM from a reader. It pointed out in one of my stories I have “slide” when I should have “slid”. And then it had:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
P.S. - just a minor request you can disregard: how about a female with regular (B) sized boobs that she considers way too small but he loves them and they are ultra sensitive and she can cum with him playing with them?
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
I felt that worked perfect for the sex scene in this story.
Originally, the sister’s name was Hailey and Ryan was the woman Matt just broke up with. A beta-reader said he didn’t like female characters with names he considered male. I decided to make the sister Erica and Matt’s ex Hailey. It was my intention from the beginning for the female character to be dressed as much as possible as Ms. Bella was in the porn video with a white dress similar to a wedding dress. When I did the name change, I decided to make the sister as like Erica Bella as possible. I changed her looks to match Ms. Bella’s. But of course, my Erica wouldn’t have Ms. Bella’s large tits. I didn’t use any of the action from the porn video as it didn’t match the circumstances of my story.
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