legerdemer
lost at sea
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K, folks - welcome to DB2. Every poem will get roughly 48 hours of time in the sun, so to speak. Give your critiques on this thread as well, with random commentary on the other one. If you wish to guess who may have written a particular poem, add that to your critique. You know what to do.
Instructions from greenmountaineer's original challenge:
Important: You do not have to submit a poem in order to provide feedback. In fact, the more feedback there is the better the challenge will be.
Note to submitters: If you're looking specific feedback, feel free to say so.
If at any time someone wants to add a poem to the mix, that's not a problem. Just send a pm to me.
If this challenge works, there may be a few take aways for us to become better writers.
Instructions from greenmountaineer's original challenge:
Important: You do not have to submit a poem in order to provide feedback. In fact, the more feedback there is the better the challenge will be.
Note to submitters: If you're looking specific feedback, feel free to say so.
If at any time someone wants to add a poem to the mix, that's not a problem. Just send a pm to me.
If this challenge works, there may be a few take aways for us to become better writers.
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