xcalibre2603
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I am not confident in my writing but this story has been troubling my mind for 3 years. I would be so grateful to see this as a multi-part Novel. I would like to help with inputs and proofreading and help provide the skeleton for the story. I would be very grateful to anyone who would help me write this story. So here is the skeleton of the story.
The story consists of 4 main characters and one secondary character.
The first main character (1st MC) in this story is a male who is fresh out of college in the world of finance. He has huge admiration for his dead parents and his father was his role model but after his parent's sudden death, he is struggling with many life decisions until he is recruited in his last year of college while doing an internship for a high-powered financial firm. There he meets a man in his early thirties (HEAD BOSS of the Firm) who is the epitome of confidence, integrity, and intelligence. In his boss, the first MC finds a role model during his internship. When he gets the job offer after his internship he jumps with both feet into working with the company.
The second main character (2nd MC) in this story is a female and she is First MC's sister. She is a teacher at a local high school. She is shy and an introvert. She is a little naive and hardcore romantic at heart which is one quality the 1st MC resents because he can't see too much goodness in anyone except his sister because he is lost after their parent's sudden death. She adores her brother but her love life is a little disappointing since every time she thinks she found the ONE she gets hurt. So for the last 2 years (after their parent's sudden death) she is a little focused on getting her brother ready for the world and helping him through his last year of college in the workforce. She always pushes her brother to see good in humanity and find the love he always pined for since 1st MC is adored to find what his father had with his mother.
The third main character is the boss of the company where 1st MC does the internship so let's call him BOSSMAN for reference. He is a decedent of an old money family in New York. He resents his father for what he had done to his mother during their marriage and divorce. His father nearly ruined his mother but after one moment of weakness, his father showed mercy to his wife and let 3rd MC and mother go with a healthy allowance. His father remarried a snobbish, fake-personality woman who is good-looking and has nothing else going for her. She is his father's trophy wife. Father has a daughter thru second marriage who is neglected and brought up by butlers and nannies. After his mother's sudden death 3rd MC moves in with his father and stepmother. There he hates everything and understands a little better about his father's true character since he is a little grown up. He hates how the workers in his father's mansion are treated. His step-sister is just 5 years old and hungry for love and nurturing. In his step-sister, he finds unconditional love which makes growing up in that mansion bearable. He makes a promise to his dead mother in heaven that he would grow up to be the dead opposite of what his father represents. He gets out of that living situation as soon as possible. He worked hard to pass a year in advance from high school and get a full scholarship to his college and master's. There in college, he does not reveal his lineage or his father's wealth and graduates with honors with some true friends who would give anything for him and vice versa. The 3rd MC's only mistake (which he himself agrees with) has done, leaving his stepsister back with no guidance thru her teenage years. In his urgency to get out of that hell hole (mansion), he forgets about keeping in touch with his step-sister during his college years or holiday season. His promise to be not like his father has the 3rd MC develop some hardcoded qualities like Integrity, no-compromise with any type of cheating, and loyalty.
The fourth main character is a female who comes into the story late. She has a moment of weakness at a party and ends up having a one-night stand which results in pregnancy. When she is out to have an abortion at a clinic since she is brought up by a single mother. There she meets 2nd MC who is out there herself contemplating whether to have an abortion or end her life. 4th MC saves 2nd MC from making a wrong decision and in turn, finds a friend for life in 2nd MC and love interest in 1st MC (2nd MC's Brother).
One secondary character which is pivotal in shaping this novella is 3rd MC's stepsister. She grew up admiring and loving her brother who took her under his wing and loved her when she was a little girl of 6 years. She was 12 years old when her stepbrother leave for college. She does not understand why her brother left or did not take her with him. She is angry and at this moment her mother takes an interest in how her daughter is growing up to be a beauty and molds her daughter into her image. The next time she sees her brother is when he is back in New York building up his financial firm. She has this image of her brother where his whole world revolved around her but got shattered when he left for college. Now she loves/hates him in her own way. She tries to get back into her brothers' life in rebellion to her parent's indifferent attitude to seeing her as a screw-up. Her mother gave up after her daughter's 16th birthday. She has dropped out of college and had a fight with her parents regarding her monthly allowance when she run into her brother.
The story consists of 4 main characters and one secondary character.
The first main character (1st MC) in this story is a male who is fresh out of college in the world of finance. He has huge admiration for his dead parents and his father was his role model but after his parent's sudden death, he is struggling with many life decisions until he is recruited in his last year of college while doing an internship for a high-powered financial firm. There he meets a man in his early thirties (HEAD BOSS of the Firm) who is the epitome of confidence, integrity, and intelligence. In his boss, the first MC finds a role model during his internship. When he gets the job offer after his internship he jumps with both feet into working with the company.
The second main character (2nd MC) in this story is a female and she is First MC's sister. She is a teacher at a local high school. She is shy and an introvert. She is a little naive and hardcore romantic at heart which is one quality the 1st MC resents because he can't see too much goodness in anyone except his sister because he is lost after their parent's sudden death. She adores her brother but her love life is a little disappointing since every time she thinks she found the ONE she gets hurt. So for the last 2 years (after their parent's sudden death) she is a little focused on getting her brother ready for the world and helping him through his last year of college in the workforce. She always pushes her brother to see good in humanity and find the love he always pined for since 1st MC is adored to find what his father had with his mother.
The third main character is the boss of the company where 1st MC does the internship so let's call him BOSSMAN for reference. He is a decedent of an old money family in New York. He resents his father for what he had done to his mother during their marriage and divorce. His father nearly ruined his mother but after one moment of weakness, his father showed mercy to his wife and let 3rd MC and mother go with a healthy allowance. His father remarried a snobbish, fake-personality woman who is good-looking and has nothing else going for her. She is his father's trophy wife. Father has a daughter thru second marriage who is neglected and brought up by butlers and nannies. After his mother's sudden death 3rd MC moves in with his father and stepmother. There he hates everything and understands a little better about his father's true character since he is a little grown up. He hates how the workers in his father's mansion are treated. His step-sister is just 5 years old and hungry for love and nurturing. In his step-sister, he finds unconditional love which makes growing up in that mansion bearable. He makes a promise to his dead mother in heaven that he would grow up to be the dead opposite of what his father represents. He gets out of that living situation as soon as possible. He worked hard to pass a year in advance from high school and get a full scholarship to his college and master's. There in college, he does not reveal his lineage or his father's wealth and graduates with honors with some true friends who would give anything for him and vice versa. The 3rd MC's only mistake (which he himself agrees with) has done, leaving his stepsister back with no guidance thru her teenage years. In his urgency to get out of that hell hole (mansion), he forgets about keeping in touch with his step-sister during his college years or holiday season. His promise to be not like his father has the 3rd MC develop some hardcoded qualities like Integrity, no-compromise with any type of cheating, and loyalty.
The fourth main character is a female who comes into the story late. She has a moment of weakness at a party and ends up having a one-night stand which results in pregnancy. When she is out to have an abortion at a clinic since she is brought up by a single mother. There she meets 2nd MC who is out there herself contemplating whether to have an abortion or end her life. 4th MC saves 2nd MC from making a wrong decision and in turn, finds a friend for life in 2nd MC and love interest in 1st MC (2nd MC's Brother).
One secondary character which is pivotal in shaping this novella is 3rd MC's stepsister. She grew up admiring and loving her brother who took her under his wing and loved her when she was a little girl of 6 years. She was 12 years old when her stepbrother leave for college. She does not understand why her brother left or did not take her with him. She is angry and at this moment her mother takes an interest in how her daughter is growing up to be a beauty and molds her daughter into her image. The next time she sees her brother is when he is back in New York building up his financial firm. She has this image of her brother where his whole world revolved around her but got shattered when he left for college. Now she loves/hates him in her own way. She tries to get back into her brothers' life in rebellion to her parent's indifferent attitude to seeing her as a screw-up. Her mother gave up after her daughter's 16th birthday. She has dropped out of college and had a fight with her parents regarding her monthly allowance when she run into her brother.
