No, no one but the Web site editor can tell you why based on what you've posted here. A reason for rejection is given. What is the wording of the reason given? Post that. No one here can help you without being given a starting point on what the issue is.
If you like, after noting the reason for rejection, you can PM me for an e-mail address and then e-mail attach it to me (in Word), and I'd take a look at it to see if I can see the problem.
Did you see evidence that this professional editor was as advertised, by the way?
Published at eXcessica, BarbarianSpy
, and Cyberworld Publishing
under the names habu
and Dirk Hessian
From 4-star 1 May 2011 review by Examiner.comís Acquanetta Ferguson of menage novella Dark Primeval
: There is also something to be said for a man who writes erotica. Some donít get it and write porn, but Habu gets what erotica is all about and the story comes off as a powerful read.
For illustrated GM stories, see stories under my habu author name at http://www.barbarianspy.com
Also, coauthoring as Shabbu
and Stephen Kessel
From the 4 1/2-Star August Rainbow Review on I Met a Man
: . . . a thoroughly wonderful reading experience for me. I look forward to reading more from the writing collaboration of habu and Sabb, who I believe make an important contribution to gay literature.