Challenging Discussion

Angeline

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This is a thread for discussing poetry challenges here on the forum. This way we don't mucky up the actual challenge threads with our ever-lyrical blabbing (always an issue for me).

Maybe you want to suggest a new challenge, wail (or preen) about the current challenge(s), tell someone how much you like their poem, offer editorial suggestions, post a link to YouTube, I don't care. You'll do whatever you want anyway. :)

Um you all rawk. Carry on.
 
Angeline said:
This is a thread for discussing poetry challenges here on the forum. This way we don't mucky up the actual challenge threads with our ever-lyrical blabbing (always an issue for me).

Maybe you want to suggest a new challenge, wail (or preen) about the current challenge(s), tell someone how much you like their poem, offer editorial suggestions, post a link to YouTube, I don't care. You'll do whatever you want anyway. :)

Um you all rawk. Carry on.

I like a tanka challange. One person writes a tanka and the next person starts their tanka with the last word of the previous one. Its nice if there is some continuity, but its not necessary.

The only other rule is for cases when two people respond to the same piece. The next person has to write two tankas, each which end in the same word, to bring order back to the thread.
 
bronzeage said:
I like a tanka challange. One person writes a tanka and the next person starts their tanka with the last word of the previous one. Its nice if there is some continuity, but its not necessary.

The only other rule is for cases when two people respond to the same piece. The next person has to write two tankas, each which end in the same word, to bring order back to the thread.
Tanka, tanka very much. Propose it and they will answer. Seriously, start a thread, see where it goes.
 
bronzeage said:
I like a tanka challange. One person writes a tanka and the next person starts their tanka with the last word of the previous one. Its nice if there is some continuity, but its not necessary.

The only other rule is for cases when two people respond to the same piece. The next person has to write two tankas, each which end in the same word, to bring order back to the thread.

Thought you might be interested in seeing some of the poems people (The_Poets) on this forum have writ together in the past. I especially like Sign Language and The Eagle Glosa. At one point we all wrote Bobs, too, a form invented by Icingsugar. If I wasn't so lazy, I'd find the archived thread where all those Bobs are. We also did some blues challenges that I loved.
 
All I can say is that I hope Sal is using a fountain pen.

I mean, I would, and thank God for blotting paper.

Oh, Champie, you embarrass me. A superb ekphrasticism. You win the "coveted" Tzara :kiss: of approval.






What was that? No, I always give the kiss there. Is that a problem? Well, can you just... Yes, move your leg that way. That'll work. :)
 
Tzara said:
All I can say is that I hope Sal is using a fountain pen.

I mean, I would, and thank God for blotting paper.

Oh, Champie, you embarrass me. A superb ekphrasticism. You win the "coveted" Tzara :kiss: of approval.






What was that? No, I always give the kiss there. Is that a problem? Well, can you just... Yes, move your leg that way. That'll work. :)
Oooh! Your moustache tickles! So do your compliments but not nearly with quite as much, ahem, twitchiness.

I saw that pic today and I absolutely needed to say something about it. I think the photograph is part of Dali's and Phillipe Halsman's collabrative effort, Dali's Moustache in 1954. A book I may have to find just because it would be great in a collection.
 
bronzeage said:
I like a tanka challenge. One person writes a tanka and the next person starts their tanka with the last word of the previous one. Its nice if there is some continuity, but its not necessary.

The only other rule is for cases when two people respond to the same piece. The next person has to write two tankas, each which end in the same word, to bring order back to the thread.


drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


Best regards,
 
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drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


hangover
old dictionary
sheds its pages
all over the place
and so does my brain



Best regards,
 

drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


hangover
old dictionary
sheds its pages
all over the place
and so does my brain


brain
gets in the way
they say
and you wonder
where is their brain


Best regards,
 

drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


hangover
old dictionary
sheds its pages
all over the place
and so does my brain


brain
gets in the way
they say
and you wonder
where is their brain


brain
i like you
you serve me so well
who are you
who am i


Best regards.
 

drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


hangover
old dictionary
sheds its pages
all over the place
and so does my brain


brain
gets in the way
they say
and you wonder
where is their brain


brain
i like you
you serve me so well
who are you
who am i


i
don't want "i"
it brings
you know
"to be or not to be?"



Best regards.
 

drunken tanka
here you go
dreaming for a moment
ending in a senryu
hangover


hangover
old dictionary
sheds its pages
all over the place
and so does my brain


brain
gets in the way
they say
and you wonder
where is their brain


brain
i like you
you serve me so well
who are you
who am i


i
don't want "i"
it brings
you know
"to be or not to be?"


to be to be
to be what
ever comes to mind
would be would be
would be silly





Best regards,
 
additional option

Let me add another option, in the spirit of bronzeage challenge. You may not only extend the tanka series but also make it wider by writing parallel tankas, which start and end with the words of an existing tanka from the series.

It would be nice then to write them side by side, with proper formating. For this one needs the constant (fixed) width font. I used to know how to do it. I am sure that Lauren still does.

For instance a tanka parallel to the first one would start with "drunken", and end up with "hangover". Parallel to the second one would start with "hangover", and end with "brain", and so on. Just write them, and later we will find a way to format them.

Furthermore, one can not only append, but also prepend the series. At the moment it would be a tanka which ends in the word "drunken'.
 
okay so after all that brilliance I hate to pull this away from tankas but this IS the talking-about-challenges thread and I need help. Could someone coach me through the process of actually putting a picture into a post, rather than just including a link? I'd like to do that for T's lovely Anaphylaxis challenge and I haven't figured out how.

thanks from the Luddite,
bj
 
unpredictablebijou said:
okay so after all that brilliance I hate to pull this away from tankas but this IS the talking-about-challenges thread and I need help. Could someone coach me through the process of actually putting a picture into a post, rather than just including a link? I'd like to do that for T's lovely Anaphylaxis challenge and I haven't figured out how.

thanks from the Luddite,
bj
You need to upload the picture to a website that allows hotlinking, and then put a linking code in your post.

I use Photobucket.com for all my post pic needs. If you upload a pic to there, they provide you with the codes you need. Just cut and paste into your post and presto.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e394/mi_liar/dabunny.jpg

Hit the quote button on this post if you want to see how the image code looks.
 
Liar said:
You need to upload the picture to a website that allows hotlinking, and then put a linking code in your post.

I use Photobucket.com for all my post pic needs. If you upload a pic to there, they provide you with the codes you need. Just cut and paste into your post and presto.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e394/mi_liar/dabunny.jpg

Hit the quote button on this post if you want to see how the image code looks.


I will begin the attempt forthwith. May still have to yell for my geek. Thank you.

bijou
 
unpredictablebijou said:
I will begin the attempt forthwith. May still have to yell for my geek. Thank you.

bijou

Here's what I do for photos not on my hard drive:

1. Go to Google images and find a thumbnail of what you want

2. Click on the thumbnail

3. The thumbnail will appear again, this time at the top of a page linked to the site from which the photo came. Click on the thumbnail so you can get a page with nothing but the image on it. That is important. You don't want a page with text and other stuff on it, just the image.

4. Right click to copy and save the image page

5. When you come back here and open your reply thread, click on Insert Image, right click and paste the url you copied, then click on Insert Image again to add the end code (which is just [/IMG]). That'll do it.

6. Miller Time. Or whatever.

I like my instructions muy specifico. :)
 
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Angeline said:
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5. When you come back here and open your reply thread, click on Insert Image, right click and paste the url you copied, then click on Insert Image again to add the end code (which is just [/I]). That'll do it. <-- "IMG", not "I". "I" is italic.
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Nota bene.
 
Except, Angeline, if you link to any site you randomly find on Google, you'll have no way of knowing if the image is there the next day. And many sites don't allow direct image embedding like that, aka hotlinking.

That's why I always add the steps (a) save image to your hard dive and (b) upload image to a server you can trust
 
Liar said:
Except, Angeline, if you link to any site you randomly find on Google, you'll have no way of knowing if the image is there the next day. And many sites don't allow direct image embedding like that, aka hotlinking.

That's why I always add the steps (a) save image to your hard dive and (b) upload image to a server you can trust

That's true, but I've only been burned a couple of times so I still do it. :eek:
 
Angeline said:
Here's what I do for photos not on my hard drive:

1. Go to Google images and find a thumbnail of what you want

2. Click on the thumbnail

3. The thumbnail will appear again, this time at the top of a page linked to the site from which the photo came. Click on the thumbnail so you can get a page with nothing but the image on it. That is important. You don't want a page with text and other stuff on it, just the image.

4. Right click to copy and save the image page

5. When you come back here and open your reply thread, click on Insert Image, right click and paste the url you copied, then click on Insert Image again to add the end code (which is just [/I]). That'll do it.

6. Miller Time. Or whatever.

I like my instructions muy specifico. :)


oh you RAWK. Thanks.

bj
 
I'd forgot that the Doc had another name. It's funny that he once wanted to write porn, but instead, sat forlorn and just wrote for kids. But I'm sure it was a hella way to make a living.
 
champagne1982 said:
I'd forgot that the Doc had another name. It's funny that he once wanted to write porn, but instead, sat forlorn and just wrote for kids. But I'm sure it was a hella way to make a living.

He wanted to write porn? I never knew that about him. Chicks with dicks come...aw never mind.
 
Angeline said:
He wanted to write porn? I never knew that about him. Chicks with dicks come...aw never mind.

I think I can see where this might be going. And I like it. A lot.

Geisel's more "adult" art (don't get all excited - it's not like that) is very much worth seeing. You can see it here.

How bout a secondary challenge for the Slavish Imitation thread, since this would be very much that?

Seussian meter. Porn. Poems should really be fewer than ten lines, since I suspect more than that would be painful.

C'mon. You know you've always wanted to. And he'd be honored, I bet.

bijou
 
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