gotherella
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- Sep 10, 2013
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- 45
hi i really need help with grammar, i have been through it a few times and tidied it up as much as i can but grammar is not a strong point of mine, i know i am prone to gerunds and dependent clauses, also if someone could just give me their views on the story line that would be great. 6000 words or just over, some minor bondage, butch/femme, you can read the first part on lit if you want to get an idea first, just follow the link in my signature. would really appreciate anyones help with this, thanks.