silverwingeddemon
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- Jun 12, 2015
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Ok, so I have just submitted CH 2 of my story; Her Dirty Little Secret.it has yet to be approved, However, I would like to hear some thoughts on CH 1. I've read all the comments, but was hoping I might get a bit more feedback here. Here is the link:
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-dirty-little-secret-pt-01
As soon as CH 2 is approved I will post the link for it as well. Also I have been considering editing my first story, Apocalyptica, and resubmitting it with another chapter. What are some thoughts on that. Any feedback would be appreciated. Here is the link to Apocalyptica:
https://www.literotica.com/s/apocalyptica
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-dirty-little-secret-pt-01
As soon as CH 2 is approved I will post the link for it as well. Also I have been considering editing my first story, Apocalyptica, and resubmitting it with another chapter. What are some thoughts on that. Any feedback would be appreciated. Here is the link to Apocalyptica:
https://www.literotica.com/s/apocalyptica