navytime09 Literotica Guru Joined Aug 10, 2009 Posts 1,634 Jan 28, 2016 #1 Erotic Coupling, 3K+ word count, first time submission. No crazy stuff, just looking for grammer and basic time line checking.
Erotic Coupling, 3K+ word count, first time submission. No crazy stuff, just looking for grammer and basic time line checking.
S Semigloss Virgin Joined Jan 28, 2016 Posts 14 Jan 28, 2016 #2 I'm no expert, but I'm willing to give it a read and report anything I notice. Perhaps we could trade for a basic check on a 7K+ story of mine, or at least the first 3K words of it. I'm not sure what exactly is meant by a time line check.
I'm no expert, but I'm willing to give it a read and report anything I notice. Perhaps we could trade for a basic check on a 7K+ story of mine, or at least the first 3K words of it. I'm not sure what exactly is meant by a time line check.
O observer7 Loves Spam Joined Mar 22, 2013 Posts 39 Jan 29, 2016 #3 Time line check probably means continuity. I.e. No mentioning polka dot pants then skipping to naked cock while not explaining how they came off.
Time line check probably means continuity. I.e. No mentioning polka dot pants then skipping to naked cock while not explaining how they came off.
