Feedback. Please be critical. My first story “Summer Fun”
I’ve just had my first story submitted, it’s about a real experience which happened a few years ago with my ex girlfriend Lisa.
Would love feedback and comments as I have loads of other similar experiences I’m planning to write about.
I’m not bothered if you think it sucks, be honest!
Username is DandJ69
Story title is “Summer Fun”
https://www.literotica.com/s/summer-fun-17
I’ve just had my first story submitted, it’s about a real experience which happened a few years ago with my ex girlfriend Lisa.
Would love feedback and comments as I have loads of other similar experiences I’m planning to write about.
I’m not bothered if you think it sucks, be honest!
Username is DandJ69
Story title is “Summer Fun”
https://www.literotica.com/s/summer-fun-17
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