Looking for an editor

Dreggenne

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Hello all you wonderfully dirty people. Looking for help with my first submission (hehe). Its a non con/slave training/pony play story. If any of you out there would be willing to help me form this into the best little story it could be, I would be ever so grateful.
 
I'd be happy to edit for you:
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- I've written many BDSM stories, on an alt, don't try looking :D, and a few for the non-con genre.
- I've edited many a story in my day. That is, I take editing jobs frequently.
- I'm certainly free for the next 5 or 6 hours. Yeah, I have a lot of space time.
 
Thank you both so much. Though I fear it is too late, I got impatient and prematurely submitted my story.

Though if people like it there can be more. Some of this story and some in the same world (all non con).

If anyone does want to give what I submitted a go through simply to help me be a better writer I would be most grateful :)
 
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