TANSTAAFL58
Lost and Profound
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- May 18, 2018
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My third story is up. It's called "The Scottish Festival". Here it is:
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-scottish-festival
It's doing ok (5300 views, 71 votes, 4.35). Unfortunately, it has no comments. I'd really like some constructive criticism and feedback. I know there is lot of room for improvement, I just don't know where. I think my grammar is ok, and spell check helps. My punctuation is poor I think, and I could use some help structurally and with character development. This is a short story,so character development is hard. My next ones are longer.
Thanks in advance.
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-scottish-festival
It's doing ok (5300 views, 71 votes, 4.35). Unfortunately, it has no comments. I'd really like some constructive criticism and feedback. I know there is lot of room for improvement, I just don't know where. I think my grammar is ok, and spell check helps. My punctuation is poor I think, and I could use some help structurally and with character development. This is a short story,so character development is hard. My next ones are longer.
Thanks in advance.