Feedback for part 7 in a series - The Jack Off Sessions Ch. 07

dlake

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Hey all. I’ve been off the grid for a few years and finally uploaded a new chapter in the story I’ve been working on. It started out as a semi-autobiographical story based on my experience with having a masturbation buddy in high school, but kind of inflated into something else.

This new chapter, having taken so long to upload, skips ahead a bit from high school to college. I initially wrote it in a much longer format, but decided to break it up so I can get something out.

Basically, it’s about two friends that experiment together sexually. In the early chapters, I introduced a sibling and some friends to help James and Brent transition from masturbation to sex. It gets into a little risqué and taboo subject matter like sexual curiosity and incest.

Picking up a little later, there’s some events that happened in the time between the last chapter and this current one. I hope to explore that in a stand-alone story.

If you have the time, please ready my current entry and give whatever creative feedback you have. I appreciate it. Thank you.
 
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-jack-off-sessions-ch-07

Hey all. I’ve been off the grid for a few years and finally uploaded a new chapter in the story I’ve been working on. It started out as a semi-autobiographical story based on my experience with having a masturbation buddy in high school, but kind of inflated into something else.

This new chapter, having taken so long to upload, skips ahead a bit from high school to college. I initially wrote it in a much longer format, but decided to break it up so I can get something out.

Basically, it’s about two friends that experiment together sexually. In the early chapters, I introduced a sibling and some friends to help James and Brent transition from masturbation to sex. It gets into a little risqué and taboo subject matter like sexual curiosity and incest.

Picking up a little later, there’s some events that happened in the time between the last chapter and this current one. I hope to explore that in a stand-alone story.

If you have the time, please ready my current entry and give whatever creative feedback you have. I appreciate it. Thank you.

Exceptionally well written. Started with the last one above and ended up reading the series. Good build up, great story lines, and great chemistry between the participants.

We all have our own kinks and you touched on several. Would like to see additional chapters where the guys have sex with the same girl (the neighbor?) At the same time. Personally, would like to also see the sister and friend talk them in to another encounter that also has the guys talked in to some additional M/M contact or situation too. I know that might limit the appeal of the stories to some, but it seems like a natural progression.

Either way, great job and this series should be on everyone's "to read" list.
 
Thank you very much for the feedback and encouragement.

There was a pretty big gap there between the last one and this new one. I wrote a lot of material dealing with the Jennie character and all the stuff that happens with Brent, James, Claire, and Allison during the camping trip where porn of Brent was made. So, there's two partially completed stories that I'm trying to revise. There's quite a bit already done, so I hope I will be able to upload those soon.

I think you will be happy with what I'm cooking up.
 
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