JaneRamsey
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What's up with Sadists? A literary request.
Hello!
I was wondering if I could get some insight on writing the motivations and feelings of sadist characters. I'm currently attempting to write a handful of chapter/scenes that I want to post here about a young House Mistress who has been sent to punish the stable boy (they are both in their 20s). In the beginning he is established in finding punishment pleasurable, but she has no idea she's going to like punishing him and has never disciplined anyone before. The general idea was to have them fall in love and form whatever kind of relationship you can have for a Mistress and Stable boy at that time (Victorian era). Any and all advice is appreciated though. Also if anyone wants to see a draft of the first scene to better give advice I can send it over (it's short don't worry).
Thank you!
-J
P.S. I've always been very comfortable with the BD side of things and less so with the SM side, but after being on this site for about a week I apparently really like reading about SM type relationships so I figured I'd hop out of my literary wheelhouse and give it a try.
Hello!
I was wondering if I could get some insight on writing the motivations and feelings of sadist characters. I'm currently attempting to write a handful of chapter/scenes that I want to post here about a young House Mistress who has been sent to punish the stable boy (they are both in their 20s). In the beginning he is established in finding punishment pleasurable, but she has no idea she's going to like punishing him and has never disciplined anyone before. The general idea was to have them fall in love and form whatever kind of relationship you can have for a Mistress and Stable boy at that time (Victorian era). Any and all advice is appreciated though. Also if anyone wants to see a draft of the first scene to better give advice I can send it over (it's short don't worry).
Thank you!
-J
P.S. I've always been very comfortable with the BD side of things and less so with the SM side, but after being on this site for about a week I apparently really like reading about SM type relationships so I figured I'd hop out of my literary wheelhouse and give it a try.