Poetry Fun Corner

[UnderYourSpell]

This is a Poetry Forum right? So let's write!! Poetry Fun Corner is much the same as a previous thread but I wanted to catch your eye!
Rules
This is for fun so no fighting here please about anything ....... the only Drama Queen in here is me!
Anyone can join in for banter or writing (yes even you!) ........ critique is encouraged but if someones poem doesn't float your boat do try and say something better than 'Your poem is crap'!
Any forms or not (unless I specifically state a form, don't worry I won't throw a Sestina at you Ange !
Feel free to include me ......... make me write too!
I might give you a title, a subject, something that has to be included in the poem or anything else my devious mind can come up with!
So are you up for it? Right let's get writing again ............ add your name below and get us started

 

[HarryHill]

gimmie

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Harry your subject is ............. Unfastening a bra!

 

[Remec]

Sure...need something to help the musr percolate between 30s

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Remec your subject is the early hours of the morning when only certain people are awake and why they are

 

[Magnetron]

It was you
Boldly showing off in the storefront window

It was you
Inviting me in from the cold October rain

Couldn't resist the temptation
Slipping my arms in yours
In this moment of weakness
I bared myself to you
Enveloping my nakedness
Hugging my breasts with such authority
Ever so firmly
A support I ached for

Electrified
Hardened nipples,
Conducive to your soft fabric
As if battery terminals charged
Sending pulses of current
Downwards through my abdomen
And beyond

To where I wished I could tuck you in

It was you
Patiently waiting for me until now

It was you
Marked down from twenty-nine to seventeen dollars

It was you
And it was me
A match made in heaven

Making for quite the pair

 

[Magnetron]

Couldn't resist, Mate. Twas collecting dust on my hard drive. Something to get Harry's creative juices flowing.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Couldn't resist, Mate. Twas collecting dust on my hard drive. Something to get Harry's creative juices flowing.

For that you will get another subject which is including the word magnetron in an erotic poem

 

[champagne1982]

For that you will get another subject which is including the word magnetron in an erotic poem

Bwahahahaha.. you know why I'm here Annie... Let's do this!


Oh and your subject is to give us a poem about having to brush snow off your car at -10C after being snowed on in April... (I am about to go and do this in a few minutes, so I'll be back to check your poemie for accuracy after work)

 

[Magnetron]

For that you will get another subject which is including the word magnetron in an erotic poem

Devil woman.

 

[HarryHill]

When Fingers Fail

It's all changed since I was young
When a deft flip released all to tongue
hands eager to grasp the world
that turned unobserved, gave the French their shot
at holding what a woman's got
secured at the front with a clever clasp
full frontal freedom with a twist
hungry lips fed on buds of red
diligent boy on a quest who found
the easiest way to bare those beauties
long slow kisses, soft words and nips

 

[butters]

It's all changed since I was young
When a deft flip released all to tongue
hands eager to grasp the world
that turned unobserved, gave the French their shot
at holding what a woman's got
secured at the front with a clever clasp
full frontal freedom with a twist
hungry lips fed on buds of red
diligent boy on a quest who found
the easiest way to bare those beauties
long slow kisses, soft words and nips

bra-vo!

 

[butters]

toss one my way, annie - i'll see if i can cudgel my brains into writing something

 

[UnderYourSpell]

It's all changed since I was young
When a deft flip released all to tongue
hands eager to grasp the world
that turned unobserved, gave the French their shot
at holding what a woman's got
secured at the front with a clever clasp
full frontal freedom with a twist
hungry lips fed on buds of red
diligent boy on a quest who found
the easiest way to bare those beauties
long slow kisses, soft words and nips

Phewwwwww that is HOT boyo!! I was trying to explain to somebody in another thread about the difference between erotic and dirty ditties, I needed an example of the erotic and this is it!!

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Bwahahahaha.. you know why I'm here Annie... Let's do this!


Oh and your subject is to give us a poem about having to brush snow off your car at -10C after being snowed on in April... (I am about to go and do this in a few minutes, so I'll be back to check your poemie for accuracy after work)

Ahhhhhhh! Cruel woman!!
Your subject is fending off an over amorous man because you're not really that much attracted!

 

[UnderYourSpell]

toss one my way, annie - i'll see if i can cudgel my brains into writing something

Your subject is torturing your feet in high heeled shoes

 

[butters]

Your subject is torturing your feet in high heeled shoes

oh crumbs!

 

[HarryHill]

oh crumbs!

Ah ha ha

 

[butters]

Ah ha ha

yeah yeah, you laugh... torture's right. i can't even walk in the damned things anymore - and to think i used to run for trains wearing them, no problem

 

[butters]

don't have a high horse
to dismount from
but i totter

on the brink of collapse
ignomy
and a plaster cast

down the catwalk of life
staring down at the ground from
my elevated perch

moon-face reflected
in burnished patent

feet martyred
immolation
and not one lotus blossom in sight

 

[Remec]

Remec your subject is the early hours of the morning when only certain people are awake and why they are

Wakefulness

I'm still awake, another night
at work, again taking in the sight
of all the other souls who must
wile away their evenings just
like me, staying barely in the light

of street lamps, of fluorescents that might
seem fine but are really much too bright
for those who float through the dark who trust
I'm still awake

The whys, wherefores, tussle and fight
with each other, but no one is right.
All are valid for not collecting dust,
schedules, insomnia--sleep is a bust,
I just nod and smile, saying, "'Ight,
I'm still awake."

 

[UnderYourSpell]

don't have a high horse
to dismount from
but i totter

on the brink of collapse
ignomy
and a plaster cast

down the catwalk of life
staring down at the ground from
my elevated perch

moon-face reflected
in burnished patent

feet martyred
immolation
and not one lotus blossom in sight

Clever girl I haven't even finished mine (I blame my husband watching loud football, not very conducive to writing!)
Love 'the catwalk of life' had to Google 'immolation' but it's just right, I've been there!

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Wakefulness

I'm still awake, another night
at work, again taking in the sight
of all the other souls who must
wile away their evenings just
like me, staying barely in the light

of street lamps, of fluorescents that might
seem fine but are really much too bright
for those who float through the dark who trust
I'm still awake

The whys, wherefores, tussle and fight
with each other, but no one is right.
All are valid for not collecting dust,
schedules, insomnia--sleep is a bust,
I just nod and smile, saying, "'Ight,
I'm still awake."

I'm sure this a form I should recognise if I didn't have my dumb head on! What's 'Ight'?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Harry your next subject is including the line 'The crack of Dawn' it's up to you how you interpret that!
.
Butters your next subject is including the words 'I found her exhilarating'
.
Remec your next subject is 'small breasts'

 

[Remec]

I'm sure this a form I should recognise if I didn't have my dumb head on! What's 'Ight'?

A dialectal contraction for alright.
Oh, and it's a rondeau...although the syllable count isn't as strict as usual.