bumfuckerie
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- Feb 3, 2014
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Hello All!
This is my first time posting on the forums, so please do forgive me if I transgress any of the unspoken (or spoken) rules I should be abiding by. If I do, please point them out to me!
Anyway, I've written my own take on the 'Biker holds family captive' cliche that I've seen here and there on literotica, for some reason that particular scenario gets me everytime. For those of you that haven't seen those stories, it's usually about an unsuspecting family that are taken captive by a group of thugs (most of the time bikers, for some weird reason) and made to do things with them and each other for their vile pleasures.
I'm here to see if anyone could suggest something novel, or just especially kinky I could add to my story (does this merit this thread being in the Story Ideas page?). In brief my family is made up of a couple and their daughter and son (both of legal age, of course) who are held captive by a biker gang on a lonely road at night. Lots of awfully dirty things happen and eventually the wife, son and daughter seem be enjoying themselves while the father/husband is tied to his trailer and forced to watch everything, disgusted.
I just thought that someone on the outside looking in might be able to add something interesting to the story that I hadn't thought of yet. I'm currently at around 5300 words, so I'm not looking to add anything massively deviant from the basic storyline I've described above.
Thanks for your time all!
This is my first time posting on the forums, so please do forgive me if I transgress any of the unspoken (or spoken) rules I should be abiding by. If I do, please point them out to me!
Anyway, I've written my own take on the 'Biker holds family captive' cliche that I've seen here and there on literotica, for some reason that particular scenario gets me everytime. For those of you that haven't seen those stories, it's usually about an unsuspecting family that are taken captive by a group of thugs (most of the time bikers, for some weird reason) and made to do things with them and each other for their vile pleasures.
I'm here to see if anyone could suggest something novel, or just especially kinky I could add to my story (does this merit this thread being in the Story Ideas page?). In brief my family is made up of a couple and their daughter and son (both of legal age, of course) who are held captive by a biker gang on a lonely road at night. Lots of awfully dirty things happen and eventually the wife, son and daughter seem be enjoying themselves while the father/husband is tied to his trailer and forced to watch everything, disgusted.
I just thought that someone on the outside looking in might be able to add something interesting to the story that I hadn't thought of yet. I'm currently at around 5300 words, so I'm not looking to add anything massively deviant from the basic storyline I've described above.
Thanks for your time all!