Zombie Darlings

[TheLobster]

immanentize the eschaton

Should I do that before or after I leverage all my synergies?

 

[THBGato]

The point is, I have to cut it. I know I do. It's a long diversion, it adds almost nothing to the story, and right now it's weighing down my draft.

That wasn't the premise, though.

It was this premise I was disagreeing with. Or rather questioning. (Far be it for me to tell another writer what to include or not.) More in a kind of "are you certain you need to cut it?" way. Like, "all of it?"