RhymeFairy
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Unbridled_Passion said:the sound of tiny footsteps
reveals a little sunshine
that is grumpy and tired
but refuses to go to sleep
I love this one Unbridled. Poetically sweet ~!!
Nice work ~

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Unbridled_Passion said:the sound of tiny footsteps
reveals a little sunshine
that is grumpy and tired
but refuses to go to sleep

RhymeFairy said:I love this one Unbridled. Poetically sweet ~!!![]()
Nice work ~
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Unbridled_Passion said:maybe I am reading too much into this
but I saw a single blue bird today
does this mean that winter will end soon?
or is the poor guy in the wrong place
at the wrong time of year?
either way, I saw a single blue bird today

RhymeFairy said:I saw your blue bird
sitting by the wayside
awaiting peace to arrive
in the disguise
of daydreams release.
I wondered too,
if he was lost.
Having overheard
his solitary plea.
Which way to go,
which way will lead
which way to find, peace
within me.
A poor boys blues
sung off key
uplifted inside the wind
and carried
to me.
No rhyme nor reason
in his lil chant
just a poor blue bird lost
chirping out his cant.
..
~~ I wanted to take your lil bird and make him real. I saw him in your words, alone ... lost. Now in mine, he has found his home. A feathered bard with cause and no action. A lil too much eh ~ Anyway ... I love your bird and wish to rein in his parade.I'm so bad eh. Thank You for letting me play with words and your bird, lol.
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bluerains said:Transcendence from Ignorance to Nibbâna!!!:
Ignorance is the proximate cause of mental construction.
Mental construction is the proximate cause of consciousness.
Consciousness is the proximate cause of name-&-form.
Name-&-form is the proximate cause of the 6 senses.
The 6 senses is the proximate cause of contact.
Contact is the proximate cause of feeling.
Feeling is the proximate cause of craving.
Craving is the proximate cause of clinging.
Clinging is the proximate cause of becoming.
Becoming is the proximate cause of birth.
Birth is the proximate cause of ageing, decay & death.
Ageing, decay & death is the proximate cause suffering.
Suffering is the proximate cause of faith.
Faith is the proximate cause of elation.
Elation is the proximate cause of joy.
Joy is the proximate cause of calmness.
Calmness is the proximate cause of happiness.
Happiness is the proximate cause of concentration.
Concentration is the proximate cause of seeing & knowing reality.
Seeing & knowing reality is the proximate cause of disgust.
Disgust is the proximate cause of disillusion.
Disillusion is the proximate cause of mental release.
Mental release is the proximate cause of ending all mental
fermentation linked with ignorance, with becoming, & with sensing.
Ending all mental fermentation is the proximate cause of Freedom..
Ending all mental fermentation is the proximate cause of Peace..
Ending all mental fermentation is the proximate cause of Bliss..
This - only this - is Nibbana ...
Source: The Grouped Sayings of the Buddha. Samyutta Nikaya II 29-32
Unbridled_Passion said:towering oak tree
in the dead of winter
one leaf hanging
afraid to surrender
and fall to its demise
crunchy and brown
devoid of life
yet still it stays
attached
until spring comes
and another takes
its place
wildsweetone said:Stick in a Mountain Lake
There is a photo I plan to take
rippled water on a mountain lake
prodded by a stick
the surface is plucked
picked up from below
stretched slow
almost sucked
back down into the black
leaving a ripple
letting out the slack.
Unbridled_Passion said:have you ever seen God's footprints?
I saw them today in the sky
as he left evidence in the clouds
I guess he decided to take a waltz
across Texas and see what was going on
in our neck of the woods
Unbridled_Passion said:love is beautiful
kindness reigns
in a world where
evil still remains
angelic souls
are there to touch
when the way of the world
becomes too much
the devil pressures
us to succumb
but goodness will
always overcome
My Erotic Trail said:the sun presses the moon out of sight
to brighten and enlighten the world
and nocturnal creatures head for the shadows
as life stretches outward into the light.
Unbridled_Passion said:maybe I will venture out into the light today, after hybernating for several days!
My Erotic Trail said:perhaps... the moon light?







My Erotic Trail said:dark days
storm clouds swirl
over the jagged ridge
atop a mountain of thoughts
shadows swim
across the valley
to a river of emotions
wading through
puddles of passion
drowning in feelings
lightening probabilities
swells pound at the dam
a soul's flood thunders
tick tock,
rain drops
falling in rythmic time
knowing, deep within
the caverns of the mind
open your eyes to the sunshine
