"You're a real early riser."

sirhugs

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opening line in search of an author. I think it might suit a newbie looking for an opener for a story that gets into the sex quickly.

think "morning wood".
 
I've got an uncompleted and / or unpolished draft somewhere about a guy who gets into the office really early during a holiday week (Christmas or Thanksgiving). He suspects no one will be in until much later if at all. (It's a small office.)

He ends up looking at some porn a freind sent him on his laptop, and has his member in hand when his female supervisor catches him in the act. She takes advantage of the event to blackmail him into a day of fun and entertainment for herself. (It turns out everyone else took vacation days.)
 
I've got an uncompleted and / or unpolished draft somewhere about a guy who gets into the office really early during a holiday week (Christmas or Thanksgiving). He suspects no one will be in until much later if at all. (It's a small office.)

He ends up looking at some porn a freind sent him on his laptop, and has his member in hand when his female supervisor catches him in the act. She takes advantage of the event to blackmail him into a day of fun and entertainment for herself. (It turns out everyone else took vacation days.)

sounds like the sort of story I'd like to read...
 
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