Your feedback requested please!!!

[M.A.Thompson]

Greetings. As a first time author on Literotica, I wanted to introduce myself and announce my freshman effort entitled “On Being the ‘Other Man’”. It is the story of a man who falls for and sleeps with his father’s wife and the emotions he deals with afterwards. It is heavy in romance and oral and also features something for leg and TF fans. I am quite proud of it and not to brag, but it has already earned an “H” and a 4.65 rating from those who have read it today. Any feedback, both positive and negative would be greatly appreciated. *** Also note, on page 1 of the story, the text is off center and due to the literotica banner on the side of the page, unreadable in areas. Page 2 appears to be fine. I have alerted Literotica tech support to this but am curious if this is happening on all computers or just mine. ***

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58547

Please enjoy and let me know what you think!!!!!!!!

M.A.Thompson

e-mail me!!!!!

 

[ladyphoenix]

A first story?

It's amazing. Part one was worth reading, even with the problem. I fought through the blue and white smears to get every word.

I gave you a five, wishing for sixes.

ladyp

 

[the_bragis]

Hello M.A. Thompson,

Your story is first class.

The reason for it running over the margin is the rows of ******** you used. Limit them to a dozen and you shouldn't have any more problems.

Have a great day,
Alex. (fem)

B and me, our fantasies

 

[M.A.Thompson]

Thanks to the_bragis, my story has been fixed!!! Thank you also for all the great feedback and support!!!!

M.A.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58547