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I just started my first incestuous series. The first part is live, part 2 is pending and part 3 is nearly finished.
Of course you can proof something a dozen times and I found a few typos I wanted to edit but the substance is there i think.
Satin Seductions - Ch 01
http://www.literotica.com/s/satin-seductions-ch-01
My major criticism is starting the story with a waking up in the morning scene. It is one of the things in fiction you are told not to do until you've gotten to a place in your writing where you can break the rules with impunity.
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That's so funny you mention that. I know the rule, even think about it when I write.
Ironically both of my series here start in the morning. I'll be sure to start my next story -- no matter what it is at an odd time
The rule isn't that a story can't start in the morning, just not when the character first wakes up. Undergrad Fiction Workshop 101.
Okay I will bite why can't a story start in the morning?
It can. There's no such rule. The issue is that it's a frequently used opening. But that would be natural, and there shouldn't be any problem with it unless it's overused within the story. (Not long ago I edited a Literotica story for someone that had several sections, all of which started in the bed in the morning. I suggested that was a bit of overkill of the technique use.)
A story can start in the morning. But starting it the moment a character wakes up in bed is cliched and wastes at least a paragraph before any real action takes place.
The rule isn't that a story can't start in the morning, just not when the character first wakes up. Undergrad Fiction Workshop 101.
Not if the character wakes up having sex. You just can't assert "rules" like this. There likely are an infinite number of ways of opening a story in the morning, in bed. And cliché is comfortable to a lot of readers.