You wouldn't believe it...

[laptopwriter]

I love writing LW stories. It's a challenge. I always try to write a plausible plot and try to keep my characters real; however, there are always those who comment and say that would never happen.

Well by girlfriend and I were invited to a friend's birthday party a while back. She had only known the birthday girl and her husband for about a year but I have know them for about 10. A couple weeks before the party I got a call from the husband crying on my shoulder saying his wife kicked him out of the house, telling him she needed some space. She also told him she did not want him at the party.

I was not sure if I wanted to go in this case but there would be more friends there so I decided to give it a shot. When we got there we were introduced to a guy I'd never seen before. Someone mentioned under their breath that the guy was birthday girl's new boyfriend. Now I was really uncomfortable and told my girlfriend we wouldn't be staying long.

About that time the wife of another couple we knew, corralled me telling me she and her husband had a big fight earlier that day and they were probably headed for a divorce.

A little later I was shocked to see the new boyfriend (of birthday girl) making out with the disgruntled wife. I kept an eye on the husband and birthday girl to gauge their reaction. Both were pissed but did nothing.

A little later all hell broke loose as the boyfriend and the wife were found screwing in the basement. I thought the husband was going to kill boyfriend and birthday girl was crying.

Now, this is absolutely true, but I were to write it into a story NO ONE would believe it.

 

[lovecraft68]

Wait, that was you at my at my ex-wife's birthday party?

Seriously something close to that happened at her birthday party six months ago. My daughter said she's scarred for life

 

[laptopwriter]

What's so funny, is...

A little while ago I wrote a story where a guy's wife got drunk and wound up having oral sex with one of the neighbors in the garage while everyone else was in the back yard. I got quite a few comments saying, even drunk, the woman would never take a chance to have sex with someone with her husband in such close proximity.

I rest my case!

 

[sr71plt]

I believe that story. Where I worked (lots of foreign offices), you had to do research on the status of coupling before going to an office party to be sure you had everyone linked right (at the moment).

Similar to your story, I went to the wedding of one of my wife's best friends to discover that the man she was marrying had hit on me in a bar just the previous week. The question of would I or would I not tell her. Because of the bar, I didn't. She eventually figured it out herself--but he hit on me nearly every time we went out with them before he finally left her for another guy.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Fiction must be logical have a progression and make some kind f sense. Real life is under non of these restrictions. In other words...Truth is stranger than fiction.

 

[laptopwriter]

well put, Ldy_Sea

I'm going to remember this story though, for the next guy who says, "that would never happen in real life."

 

[Handley_Page]

A little while ago I wrote a story where a guy's wife got drunk and wound up having oral sex with one of the neighbors in the garage while everyone else was in the back yard. I got quite a few comments saying, even drunk, the woman would never take a chance to have sex with someone with her husband in such close proximity.

I rest my case!

Puts me in mind of my first wife. . . .

 

[Hypoxia]

Parties are much simpler when all attendees just assume that (more than one) somebody is going to fuck (more than one) somebody else there. And more fun when hedonistic cousins are hosting or involved. Gets even better when it's a warm evening at a clothing-optional backyard pool. Like my Palm Springs cousin's parties, oh yeah.

 

[DeYaKen]

Snap

A little while ago I wrote a story where a guy's wife got drunk and wound up having oral sex with one of the neighbors in the garage while everyone else was in the back yard. I got quite a few comments saying, even drunk, the woman would never take a chance to have sex with someone with her husband in such close proximity.

I rest my case!

I got a lot of comments and emails telling me that characters in one of my stories wouldn't behave the way they did. The characters and their behaviour were all based on real people and real happenings.

The truth is stranger than fiction, or as we say in Britain. "You couldn't make it up."

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

All my tales are built atop IRL sexual incidents. If woman is horny you can fuck her.

Keep her purse full and her belly full and she wont give you any trouble.