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Lemme know what you prefer.

In a new series a killer has an older girlfriend with an 18 year old daughter. He fucks both. He lives with his mom, an ex-con and alcoholic.

Do I keep his ma as ma, or make her his married secretary or married land lady? He'll fuck her, too.
 
Landlady. He eventually gets fed up with her being drunk and loud as well as paying rent to her. So he kills her as a sort of casual afterthought - a minor subplot to convince readers of his real character which is being developed in the main plotline.
 
Lemme know what you prefer.

In a new series a killer has an older girlfriend with an 18 year old daughter. He fucks both. He lives with his mom, an ex-con and alcoholic.

Do I keep his ma as ma, or make her his married secretary or married land lady? He'll fuck her, too.

Normally, I'd lean towards the mother but him having a married landlady opens up all kinds of possibilities.

I've written more than one story about a tenant paying her rent with sex.

Actually, to make the story more interesting or believable, he needs to have a dawg. A mangy mongrel of a dog. A dog that he seemingly hates but truly loves. He loves his dawg more than any woman.

You'd need to give the dawg a good name though. Just off the top of my head, I dunno, I'd name the dawg...Dawg.

Actually, I wrote a story about a dawg named Dawg. Geez, seemingly, I've written stories about everything except for you JB.
 
Normally, I'd lean towards the mother but him having a married landlady opens up all kinds of possibilities.

I've written more than one story about a tenant paying her rent with sex.

Actually, to make the story more interesting or believable, he needs to have a dawg. A mangy mongrel of a dog. A dog that he seemingly hates but truly loves. He loves his dawg more than any woman.

You'd need to give the dawg a good name though. Just off the top of my head, I dunno, I'd name the dawg...Dawg.

Actually, I wrote a story about a dawg named Dawg. Geez, seemingly, I've written stories about everything except for you JB.

Which means, with all this, he should ride a HD, too, huh?
 
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