Yo Editors!

[Sammael Bard]

I need your help in editing a story of mine. ANY help will be appreciated - be it in terms of grammatical (mainly) or plot (loosely).

The story is at 24 pages and I expect the first chapter to be at 50/60 pages. There's loads of action in the later 10 pages or so...and more in the upcoming pages.

Aaaand since I'm not forcing you to do this, I don't want you to bail out on me after a month with a lame excuse. So think before you agree.

Please post here if you're still interested.

Please do tell me about your pet peeves/hates and things you can't edit. I'll make sure you don't have to edit such a part. I can try and edit that part myself.

C'mon, I'm not a retard!

 

[PennLady]

Can you give more info about the story? 24 pages isn't a big help; word count is better, since people set their screens, fonts, etc., to be different. 24 pages on your computer might be 30 on mine. But 10k words is 10k words.

Also, knowing the category or -ies would be helpful, and hopefully reduce any future bailing.

 

[Sammael Bard]

Sorry!

(Sorry!)

Word count: 8k approx.

Categories: I'm not sure myself. Actual sex is nearly zero.

I'm giving tags instead.

Tags include Sci-fi, action, Noncon (there is no rape, pinky promise), one consensual sex scene and fem dom.

Story arc: It follows the life of a soldier from future Earth, Eric, and is written in 1st person, past tense.

Did I miss something else?

 

[Sammael Bard]

Deleted.

 

[LadyVer]

I'm curious about the premise.