Yet another silly idea

[KristyLeigh]

Is everbody getting fed up my silly ideas yet? Well, here's yet another one for those who haven't reached the point of no return. This is actually a panel from a comic strip I had in mind but never got round to finishing:

http://dc368.4shared.com/img/MtY37xY0/s7/cherri.jpg​

Long version as follows:

18 year-old Cherri borrows her Daddy's Lamborghini without permission and gets involved in a minor accident. Fearing she'll get a spanking for scratching the paintwork, she takes it to a backstreet mechanic, intending to pay the repair bill with her credit card. From there, thing go from bad to worse. First, she gets grease on her $200 dollar tube dress when she walks into the workshop. Stripping down to her bra and panties, she hands the dress over to be soaked in paint thinners, unaware it will dissolve in the caustic solution.

Next, a bunch of grease monkeys drop by the repair shop and mistake her for a publicity model, taking photographs with their cell phones. Further misfortunes conspires to separate Cherri from her bra; a clip of a panic-stricken, topless girl fleeing a Brooklyn service station eventually turns up on BoobTube. Adding insult to injury, the mechanic's bill completely drains Cherri's credit card, leaving her overdrawn by several thousand dollars. She eventually drives home in her bare panties, thinking she'll be able to deceive her father while he's still at work.

Unfortunately for Cherri, her Daddy is already waiting for her at the front door: the credit card company called his office to inform him of his daughter's massive overdraft. The story ends with Cherri being taken straight over her father's knee for the punishment she was so desperately trying to avoid:

"No Daddy no, I'm TOO OLD for a spanking!!"

 

[Fantasies_only]

Is everbody getting fed up my silly ideas yet? Well, here's yet another one for those who haven't reached the point of no return. This is actually a panel from a comic strip I had in mind but never got round to finishing:

http://dc368.4shared.com/img/MtY37xY0/s7/cherri.jpg​

Like it as a comic strip, don't know if it would work as a story here though.

I really like your pictures.
It seems like you illustrate the story with ease.
I was wondering if you do custom stories (series of pictures that tells a story with only a small caption instead of thought bubbles or speech balloons)?

 

[want2_watchwife]

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[DocCIS]

Once again I don't think your ideas are silly in the least...they just have a bit of humorous, naive twist to them...and I love your illustrations. They have a 50's feel with modern content to me, very sexy!

Love this storyline as well, have seen a few other similar "mechanic" stories but this has a cute twist to it...just wish I had time to even attempt anything new right now, but moving to a new state, new job, etc. has my hands full with what little spare time I have!

 

[Grimfalcon]

I think it’s a great idea, not necessarily concentrating on the mechanics as the sexual venue, but as Cherri being a spoiled brat and her father a strong disciplinarian. There are a lot of people, particularly woman from my experience, that enjoy reading spanking and punishment erotica.
She could in essence be a budding submissive, and enjoys the additional humiliation of having her ass paddled red through OTK spanking, belts, or a cane by her father, while keeping incest out of the plot line.

She could be having a secret sexual relationship with one or more of her father’s house staff. Maybe the dominant hand of a younger man is just what this snotty, pampered little brat needs to keep her in line from time to time. Yeah, I enjoy writing this kind of stuff, and I like the satirical humor in it as well.

 

[Fantasies_only]

I think it’s a great idea, not necessarily concentrating on the mechanics as the sexual venue, but as Cherri being a spoiled brat and her father a strong disciplinarian. There are a lot of people, particularly woman from my experience, that enjoy reading spanking and punishment erotica.
She could in essence be a budding submissive, and enjoys the additional humiliation of having her ass paddled red through OTK spanking, belts, or a cane by her father, while keeping incest out of the plot line.

She could be having a secret sexual relationship with one or more of her father’s house staff. Maybe the dominant hand of a younger man is just what this snotty, pampered little brat needs to keep her in line from time to time. Yeah, I enjoy writing this kind of stuff, and I like the satirical humor in it as well.

I think you're miss reading the meaning of spoiled brat.
A spoiled brat is one who complains about not getting her way (brat) so the parent or guardian will eventually give in (spoiled).

Being bitchy (argumentative) does not always go with being a brat, so the story would be better with a milder personality and more lenient punishment.

I could see her as a gold digger though (which would explain her spoiled personality).

 

[Grimfalcon]

I think you're miss reading the meaning of spoiled brat.
A spoiled brat is one who complains about not getting her way (brat) so the parent or guardian will eventually give in (spoiled).

Being bitchy (argumentative) does not always go with being a brat, so the story would be better with a milder personality and more lenient punishment.

I could see her as a gold digger though (which would explain her spoiled personality).

I didn’t misread anything; I looked at it from the perspective of her literally being a spoiled brat to a rich father, as well as a ‘brat’ in the aspect of the BDSM community. A sub that acts out for attention, in defiance, or to test a Dom, while intentionally seeking some form of punishment in the process. That’s a quick explanation of a complex, D/s relationship.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Sorry, I didn't know the lingo.

I think we should keep the spankings and whippings to more conventional tools.
For a whipping, I can see her father taking his belt to her ass (panties or thong on) while his pants fall to the floor revealing a big, thick hardon (penis sticking out of underwear fly).

Cherri's bra is caught on a nail in the chair causing the hook to come undone.
As she is spanked (with paddle not cane) his orgasm grows inside him as he jiggles his leg up and down.
This causes one of her bra straps to slide down her shoulder.
Her father holds her other shoulder and slides his hand down taking the loose strap with him (bra too big on her).
His leg jiggles wildly as the entire bra pops off her bouncy breasts.

Cherri's father will only see side boob from his angle (and the top when they bounce), but she is forbidden to cover up.
When the doorbell rings, she is told as part of her punishment she must take off her panties and stay naked for the rest of the day, until her dress is ready in the morning.

When she complains, her dad tells her he'll leave his dick out if it makes her feel any better.
The window curtains are then opened to let everyone see Cherri in the buff, with her dad's cum running down her back.