Yet another First Submission

[pouyqwert]

Hi there

I've been lurking around Literotica for years, enjoying many of the stories. I've submitted a few, but they were always rejected.

I finally have one accepted and would like others constructive ideas before I submit the next 3 chapters I have written.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=385934

Thanks for taking the time.

Terry