yet another feedback request!

[Modernmenelaus]

For which I apologise. I'd really appreciate honest feedback on a story series I've worked on, and got almost no comment on.

http://www.literotica.com/s/an-emerging-pt-01

 

[PennLady]

I just read this and while it's well-written, I can't say it did much for me. For one thing -- and I know you pointed this out -- it's in LW territory and I have little patience for anyone who cheats on a spouse (except for big reasons like abuse). So I couldn't empathize with Rachael; perhaps if her husband had been neglecting her, I might have, but she appears to have most things in order. Her husband loves her, thinks she's sexy and ... so she has to have sex with strangers?

As for the feedback itself, I noticed that you've turned off public comments. That probably accounts for it. I think a lot of people don't mind public comments, especially if they can be anonymous, but would rather do that than email you directly. Can't explain it, that just seems to be how it is.