Yup. Like the title says I would like somebody out there to edit a story I've written. It's the first erotic story I've written - or rather it's the first chapter to the first erotic story I've written - and I'm looking for someone to proofread, provide feedback and all that good stuff.
It's in English, has a 1583 word count, and it's more story heavy than sex heavy as it's more on establishing the characters and the story. That's really what I'm looking for most feedback on, whether or not the character's motivations are clear of if it's all a giant cliche and I should just drop it all now.
Any interested person(s) who would be interested would have my undying e-love.
It's in English, has a 1583 word count, and it's more story heavy than sex heavy as it's more on establishing the characters and the story. That's really what I'm looking for most feedback on, whether or not the character's motivations are clear of if it's all a giant cliche and I should just drop it all now.
Any interested person(s) who would be interested would have my undying e-love.
