Wrote a story very different from my others and could really use some feedback on it.

[HappySpouse]

I have finished the first draft a story about a bisexual wife's lesbian journey. I think it is looking to be really good (if you're into that). However, it is my first story in 3rd person, my first fiction story, and it is about three times longer than my others (18,600 words).

I would just like a couple people to read it and tell me their impressions of what works and what doesn't.

 

[Tigersman]

You need to post a link to it.

 

[HappySpouse]

It isn't published yet. I was going to message to people willing to give a read.