Stella_Omega
No Gentleman
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- Jul 14, 2005
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My preferred POV is third person, with the thoughts of one character included- what your chart calls Thrid Person Omniscient Limited...
I got bitched out because "Passing The Torch" was limited to one POV instead of both characters.
In "Sarabande" I try to include the thoughts of both main characters, and I've gotten complaints about it from people who say that it's confusing. So whatever. Maybe editing would help that, since I'm just not comfortable with it in the first place...
I have first person subjective- SO much fun! in Mad Moll. It makes me laugh every time I read it, so it's successful for one reader at least
"The Baroness' Boy", I find from your chart, is written in Third objective- with no dialogue at all. I've had both roses and tomatoes thrown at me for that. I like it very much, I think it was a very successful experimeent.
I got bitched out because "Passing The Torch" was limited to one POV instead of both characters.
In "Sarabande" I try to include the thoughts of both main characters, and I've gotten complaints about it from people who say that it's confusing. So whatever. Maybe editing would help that, since I'm just not comfortable with it in the first place...
I have first person subjective- SO much fun! in Mad Moll. It makes me laugh every time I read it, so it's successful for one reader at least
"The Baroness' Boy", I find from your chart, is written in Third objective- with no dialogue at all. I've had both roses and tomatoes thrown at me for that. I like it very much, I think it was a very successful experimeent.
