29wordsforsnow
beyond thirty
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I honestly wonder when this will happen to writers too.
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Blow on Chilly WindAs I walk into the bitter winter wind
my coat flaps around me, unclosed
the cold goes unnoticed
the wind doubles it’s effort
as if angry with me for ignoring its power
i shudder and pull my coat tight
satisfied, the wind dies, victorious
one step at a timeSome words don't translate well
The senses shift in time
Disconnected names
Once so familiar to the tongue
Are adjectives for
Intimacies half remembered
Time becomes a distance
Of atlantean proportions
I've no map
No means to find my way back
oh I felt the bite of frostDecember
Faint of heart beware,
vampthused we share
naked mind to bear
always up for dare
Transfixed, suspended,
feet fixed in overnight ice
awaiting dawn and sun's warmth
frozen in place,lost
in a static dream
I can't remember
but can't forget.
Into the sucker hole
a brief interlude
of bue sky
in a dreary succession
of cold, grey days.
that gave me shiversMemes
He told me, I want
to choke you—
and though I shook my head no,
he did it anyway, because the internet
told him it was hot.
I thrashed and hit
at his hands and arms
until he finally relented
and I never saw him again
until three weeks later
when he did some special thing
with his fingers
that made me come like Revelation.
But do not touch my throat,
I said, still flexing my hips,
long afterwards.
Mate, never worry about what you write. Great work.I don’t really know how to write poetry. I know I shouldn’t compare mine to anyone’s, but the writing here feels amazing to me. Mine looks and feels clumsy and amateur in comparison. Here goes … fuck it.
December Morning
The 5:18 sky
Is dark blue like my bruises.
Sleepless again.
I work out… breathe… try not to think.
Thought is the enemy.
By 6:42 I’m in my truck,
Watching the sky shift gently to pink…
Gentle… soft… beautiful, like your smile.
It’s 24° and the cold feels good.
I don’t bother with the heat.
Just work gloves to keep my hands warm.
I used to think the winter fields were dead,
Barren and brown.
Perspectives shift…
Now they’re blonde, like you.
The woods were grey in the past.
But now I see orange and light brown
In the sunlit woods…
Beech trees, with their brown leaves hanging on… it touches me, like ur hand.
Hard frost, leaves on the glittering lawns.
Shadows on the roadway.
I smile. I am alive.
Goodbye Iraq.