Writing it my way, and inspiration.

[Lisa Denton]

I was lost and lookin around. I have a story almost finished, the ideas are all formed and it is actually about 2 thirds finished but I need some hot inspiration to lead into my sweltering ending with a headbanging blast.

I looked here and seen where Amicus had a homophobic thread dealing with why we didn't invade russia and iran after world war 2, or somethin like that. It didn't inspire me.

I looked in the news and seen there is a strange new brain eating parasite.

"PHOENIX (AP) - It sounds like science fiction but it's true: A killer amoeba living in lakes enters the body through the nose and attacks the brain where it feeds until you die."

Which was interesting, but some peoples died and so it is sad. But some brain eating parasite specialist from the CDC said:
"Beach cautioned that people shouldn't panic about the dangers of the brain-eating bug."
So then I figured he says not to worry so I won't, but still, where the fuck is my inspiration?

So I decided to start this thread hoping some peoples will reply helping me and also some peoples can post if they are stuck on something.

Now, you can't write my story but the ideas and inspiration I am wanting I might can take one of your ideas and spin it my way. The problem I am having is that I usually have a friend edit out all the emotion and feelings from a story before posting to leave only hot sex. But not this time, the story is about the emotions and feelings, and I am gonna edit for spelling and grammar and submit, all by myself.

So, scenario. Two women, the plot has gone on though a complex maze, they are both willing and ready and the nipple play has started. All I need before going on to my preplanned ending is just the nippleization.

Should they pinch, pull, and bite? Or just playful tease and lick?

Any ideas will be appreciated.

Also my internet connection keeps going out so I am pleading for help before my next crash and burn.

 

[lesbiaphrodite]

breast to breast touching, nipple pricking at nipple, heavy eye contact, panting, groping, moaning

 

[Lisa Denton]

breast to breast touching, nipple pricking at nipple, heavy eye contact, panting, groping, moaning

Ha, ha!!!!! That was just what I was wantin!!!

When I seen heavy eye contact I thought about that with no talking, none needed, I think that will work for what I am wanting. Thank you for giving me a idea.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Lisa,

Did you forget - lick, suck and nibble?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

LISA

When the ending crashes and burns the problem is always at the beginning. WANT, OBSTACLE, ACTION.

If I'm the protagonist in your tale, and want some pussy, but have a Siamese twin who's attched to me at the weener (obstacle), I have to do something inorder to get any pussy. Want and obstacle determine action, and the action determines the resolution.

 

[tickledkitty]

If I'm the protagonist in your tale, and want some pussy,

*shudders*



Anyway, biting, Lisa. Definitely biting and pulling with the teeth.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

skank

 

[Lisa Denton]

Hey now, I appreciate the suggestions but don't be calling nobody skank.

I am gonna take everbodies advice, though I don't know about writing in a siamese twin with a weener. The ideas have been coming along with the suggestions in this thread so thanks everyone. Also, I think my story will get much longer before I go to my preplanned diabolical ending.

THANKS!!!!!!!

 

[3113]

Could you put in a vampire goat?

 

[S-Des]

I'm a dopey guy, so I'll just suggest you have a 3rd party, playing the voyeur from the closet. Although if I had my druthers (is that a real word?), I'd say start with tentative licking and sucking, then have her straddling the other girls leg, getting more turned on as she moved up and down, and the nipple play becomes nibbling, then biting. Maybe even have one of the women have more sensitive nipples so that she doesn't like it rough, so has to be encouraged to bite and pull harder by the other girl (who does like it rough). But you probably shouldn't listen to me, I've never had girl-girl sex.

 

[Lisa Denton]

The vampire goat siamese twin with a weener hidin in the closet watching is gonna have to be my next story. This one isn't a horror story, its a love story, but I will try to get to that stuff next.

thanks for the suggestions.

 

[ms.read]

Could you put in a vampire goat?

I thought it was a goat vampire?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

The vampire goat siamese twin with a weener hidin in the closet watching is gonna have to be my next story. This one isn't a horror story, its a love story, but I will try to get to that stuff next.

thanks for the suggestions.

Aha!!! A love story between a traveling Salami Salesman and a spinster bag lady. I can see it now. Love in the back seat of a Safeway shopping cart. Way to Go..... Lisa.

 

[Lisa Denton]

I thought it was a goat vampire?

I didn't even know very many people saw that thread, but to clarify, it was a goat blood-sucking vampire. It would suck the blood out of goats, which isn't easy, or so I have heard. The vampire itself was like a big ugly dog with huge fangs, and there were other reports of sightings, meaning the vampires run in packs, and peoples in rural areas of texas should take a shotgun with them to the outhouse.

These things have no connection with the texas brain eating parasites that live in lakes and go up your nose and eat your brain. Of course, scientifically I suppose it is possible, but I doubt that many "experts" live long enough to write a report.

All of this stuff was not in National Enquirer but in the AP news so you know it is true. This doesn't mean that if you come to vacation in texas you should be armed and wear a full body condom, but it wouldn't hurt.

 

[Lisa Denton]

Aha!!! A love story between a traveling Salami Salesman and a spinster bag lady. I can see it now. Love in the back seat of a Safeway shopping cart. Way to Go..... Lisa.

I find myself strangely aroused at the thought of salami and shopping carts.

I like the way you think.

 

[xssve]

How about a brain eating Salami? Oh wait, I have one of those already - how about a goat-blood sucking nipple that travels by shopping cart?

Or a brain eating nipple, that would be fun. Ever see the CSI where the hooker doses her nipple with a sedative?

Nipples are almost mroe fun not to touch - rubbing agaisnt a shirt, and so forth - it can be difficult talking to a woman with erect nipples - you feel so compelled to just reach out and give them a little tweak or a nibble.

Soooo juvenile, or perhaps more infantile even, but still...