Writing Exercise: Orgasm!

The correct past participle of grind is ground in AE. But grinded is used sometimes, particularly wrt dancing.
It struck me that "ground" might be more appropriate for coffee beans rather than, well, other kinds of beans. I could be wrong though! 😁
 
Here’s mine, or as much as I could cram into exactly 350 words. I think maybe if I had more words I could focus on the actual orgasm more, because I thought it important to describe what the character is seeing, as that is what makes him cum.

I knelt naked on their green rug between the two bastions of beauty I had somehow fallen into. The lamp by the bed glowed an amber hue that lit the room and illuminated Amy’s succulent, vivacious body. Amy’s top, black with rose trim, laid discarded on the floor before me. Her heavy breasts sat loose and free above her chubby belly, her nipples round and pink, her cleavage vast enough to swallow me whole. Down came her leggings and free became her big round ass for my eyes to devour.

She struck a sideways pose with her arms wide in the air and her curves laid bare for me to witness. “Go ahead and stroke for me,” she said, my cock already twitching into hardness. I rubbed the little thing between my right forefinger, middle finger, and thumb, not wanting to disappoint her any more than I already had. She smiled and brushed her long brown curtain of hair behind her bare right shoulder.

Abbie’s warm hands touched each of my shoulders, her warm breath brushing against my right cheek. “You can look, but you can’t touch.” Her low bemused tone of voice took me deeper in. “You’re lucky to even get this from us, with that tiny little thing between your legs.”

“Mmmh,” I moaned, shut my eyes, and looked to the cream colored ceiling. “Yes, Mistress Abbie!” I squealed as if everything, even my own pleasure at their nakedness, was completely out of my control. They submerged me like a wave and struck me like a lightning bolt.

I only jerked more rapidly as Abbie said,
“Good boy,” and let go of my shoulders to walk in front of me, her big round ass bouncing with each sultry step, the rolls of fat on her upper back pale and delicious. She turned and posed at Amy’s left side. The redhead’s tits were even bigger, her pink nipples the size of pancakes pointing down into her fatter belly to send me over the edge. As I dribbled out a load of hot cum, both of them giggled at me.
 
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