Writing Challenge ~ September 2012 ~ Comments and Reviews

[Britwitch]

WRITING CHALLENGE REVIEW THREAD ~ SEPTEMBER 2012​

Just a few little rules for this thread:-

• This thread is for comments and reviews only. Submissions go here!

• Please keep your comments focused on the pieces posted for the challenge running from 11th – 29th September 2012 only, this is not really intended to be a thread for conversation/flirting/mayhem and so on (Sorry to be a bore!). Writers should be able to find reviews/comments for their pieces without having to trawl through pages of banter (no matter how amusing/sexy it might be!)

• Readers/Reviewers:- Please keep your comments and reviews polite and, wherever possible, positive. If you have constructive criticism or advice for writers please do give it but be polite about it! You don’t have to like everything you read but if you really don’t have anything nice to say about something then I would suggest you refrain from posting. And if all you want to say is you liked a piece and no more…that’s great too! We all know how writers like to be appreciated!

• Authors:- Please take constructive criticism as it is intended, as an attempt at improving possible flaws/problems/areas of confusion in your piece. They are not (hopefully!) personal attacks on you or your work.

• This is supposed to be a fun way to get to know new writers and potential partners, to exercise our writing brains, it’s not a competition, please keep that in mind!

• One more thing…suggestions for future prompts are very welcome and should be PM’d to me – Britwitch – as a link ideally.

Previous challenges and reviews can be found here.

Happy reading!

 

[fr33ks33k]

I'm gonna call Miss Vivi's piece The Knife. I really enjoyed the dark twist on the sensual gif that Brit posted as a prompt. It was something that I expected from Vivi, but enjoyed all the same. It almost compels me to write an opposing story, where the woman is the antagonist. Almost.

 

[Miss_Vivi]

I'm gonna call Miss Vivi's piece The Knife. I really enjoyed the dark twist on the sensual gif that Brit posted as a prompt. It was something that I expected from Vivi, but enjoyed all the same. It almost compels me to write an opposing story, where the woman is the antagonist. Almost.

Write it.

And I know it was something that is par for the course for me, I'm working on breaking that. But the guy struck me as so smarmy, though the pic was good. Thanks Fr33k, I know I can always count on your for a good honest review.

All the same... write it!

 

[Miss_Vivi]

cancerous cantaloupe

The best part of that whole read. Awesomely done!

 

[Britwitch]

Such darkness. Love it!

Both pieces came from similar places, and were an awesome twist on the prompt but that is the point of the challenge after all.

Vivi and fr33k, both brilliant little scenes. You both have such skill when it comes to making awesome word choices. Very eloquent.

Would love to read more from these two characters...have them meet somewhere, somehow...sharing the same dark secret...a similar past...

grins

Thanks for posting.

 

[Britwitch]

This month's challenge is now closed for new submissions!

Thanks to those that posted.



Please feel free to read and review here if you haven't done so already!



Next month's challenge will begin tomorrow!​