Writing Challenge ~ May 2015 ~ Comments and Reviews

[Britwitch]

WRITING CHALLENGE REVIEW THREAD ~ MAY 2015​

Just a few little rules for this thread:-

• This thread is for comments and reviews only. Submissions go here!

• Please keep your comments focused on the pieces posted for the challenge running from 1st – 31st May 2015 only, this is not really intended to be a thread for conversation/flirting/mayhem and so on (Sorry to be a bore!). Writers should be able to find reviews/comments for their pieces without having to trawl through pages of banter (no matter how amusing/sexy it might be!)

• Readers/Reviewers:- Please keep your comments and reviews polite and, wherever possible, positive. If you have constructive criticism or advice for writers please do give it but be polite about it! You don’t have to like everything you read but if you really don’t have anything nice to say about something then I would suggest you refrain from posting. And if all you want to say is you liked a piece and no more…that’s great too! We all know how writers like to be appreciated!

• Authors:- Please take constructive criticism as it is intended, as an attempt at improving possible flaws/problems/areas of confusion in your piece. They are not (hopefully!) personal attacks on you or your work.

• This is supposed to be a fun way to get to know new writers and potential partners, to exercise our writing brains, it’s not a competition, please keep that in mind!

• One more thing…suggestions for future prompts are very welcome and should be PM’d to me – Britwitch – as a link ideally.

Previous challenges and reviews can be found here.

Happy reading!

 

[Britwitch]

Lover's Truths/Lover's Lies ~ fr33ks33k

Ah, you and your words. Another wonderful submission from you, lyrical and lovely and as brilliant as they always are!

We Were Expecting You ~ runningonblade

A fun piece, I'll admit I got a little lost the first time I read it but it was definitely fun to read.

The Portal ~ DreamCloud

I absolutely loved this. Magical and mysterious with a hint of romance in there. Awesome stuff, thank you so much for sharing this with us!

 

[DreamCloud]

Lover's Truths/Lover's Lies ~ fr33ks33k

Ah, you and your words. Another wonderful submission from you, lyrical and lovely and as brilliant as they always are!

We Were Expecting You ~ runningonblade

A fun piece, I'll admit I got a little lost the first time I read it but it was definitely fun to read.

The Portal ~ DreamCloud

I absolutely loved this. Magical and mysterious with a hint of romance in there. Awesome stuff, thank you so much for sharing this with us!

You are most kind. I have to thank you for the diversion. I was stuck on a different story and your inspiration cleared my mind. I returned happily recharged.