Writing Challenge ~ 20th February - 18th March ~ Reviews and Comments

[Britwitch]

WRITING CHALLENGE REVIEW THREAD ~ FEBRUARY 2012​

Just a few little rules for this thread:-

• This thread is for comments and reviews only. Submissions go here!

• Please keep your comments focused on the pieces posted for the challenge running from 20th February – 19th March 2012 only, this is not really intended to be a thread for conversation/flirting/mayhem and so on (Sorry to be a bore!). Writers should be able to find reviews/comments for their pieces without having to trawl through pages of banter (no matter how amusing/sexy it might be!)

• Readers/Reviewers:- Please keep your comments and reviews polite and, wherever possible, positive. If you have constructive criticism or advice for writers please do give it but be polite about it! You don’t have to like everything you read but if you really don’t have anything nice to say about something then I would suggest you refrain from posting. And if all you want to say is you liked a piece and no more…that’s great too! We all know how writers like to be appreciated!

• Authors:- Please take constructive criticism as it is intended, as an attempt at improving possible flaws/problems/areas of confusion in your piece. They are not (hopefully!) personal attacks on you or your work.

• This is supposed to be a fun way to get to know new writers and potential partners, to exercise our writing brains, it’s not a competition, please keep that in mind!

• One more thing…suggestions for future prompts are very welcome and should be PM’d to me – Britwitch – as a link ideally.

Previous challenges and reviews can be found here.

Happy reading!

 

[WordlessSoul]

I'm loving the story from The_PG

Very nice.

 

[monique_minx]

Of course the PG gleans inspiration from that image sooo easily

Nice work, as I expect of you darlin'

 

[The_PG]

Thank you chica's!

Yes, graytones and handcuffs certainly have that appeal.

I know at least one of you wouldn't mind those handcuffs around their wrists.

 

[jack80]

About my submission, I never wrote anything like it before, so I expect to be crucified upon the wood structure in it. Meh. I had to try.

 

[chronicle_tenko]

Not crucified. It's tragic, but touching in it's way. Also good.

I've always liked Ghost Stories.