(WRITER'S Q) Anyone want to read a good story?

[NoJo]

Zero stories in over two years, now three in two weeks. I feel like rogering a maiden.

I actually think this last one is pretty good, and because of that, I'd really love it if any authors were willing to cast their eyes over it and help me tighten it up, highlight confusion, etc.

It's a Romance set in 17th centrury Japan (yeah, it's by me, Sub Joe). It is a first person female point of view, and there's no smart-ass in it.

Please PM / post if you're interested.


Joe.

 

[Guest]

Send it. P.

 

[Guest]

Sent back comments. P.

 

[CharleyH]

Send it. I am on computer breakdown, so when new one gets here tomorrow, and once I figure out how to download this to that . . . by Friday, I will and provide. Just expect honest critique

 

[NoJo]

Send it. I am on computer breakdown, so when new one gets here tomorrow, and once I figure out how to download this to that . . . by Friday, I will and provide. Just expect honest critique

Id actually much prefer dishonest flattery. pm addy, will send.

 

[Guest]

Id actually much prefer dishonest flattery.

Uh oh.

P.

 

[NoJo]

mailed you, P. don't be so farshimmelt.

 

[Guest]

I am so not farshimmelt, you boychik. P.