Write what happens

[Starhoney]

Hey This is my first time posting. I have written a few stories another is pending. I write stories that happen to me. I have not submitted them to be edited because I feel like it will take away from what happened. Anyone have suggestions as to how I can improve stories or if they are find for what they are real life scenarios. Any words great appriciated

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=74009 http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=54217

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Hey This is my first time posting. I have written a few stories another is pending. I write stories that happen to me. I have no submitted them to be edited because I feel like it will take away from what happened. Anyone have suggestions as to how I can improve stories or if they are find for what they are real life scenarios. Any words great appriciated

1. use good grammar (punctuation, complete sentences etc)
2. use a spell check
3. read it aloud..does it make sense?

please link your stories if you would like more specific advice

 

[TheEarl]

Read other people's stories that are like yours. See how other authors have done similar things.

Put your stories up to the Story Discussion Circle. And don't take the huff if it's taken apart.

Good luck.

The Earl

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Do what deliciously naughty and TheEarl suggested.

Your stories have energy, but you need to spend some time on the basics of writing and grammar..

RF