Yippieh
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Hi,
First: I'm sorry for my bad english. I try to make as less mistakes as possible.
What do you think of the following story idea?
In 50 years the economy will be down since a decade. For a young girl without work, it isn't easy to survive.
There is a chance for lesbian women to got a contract in a female sexfighting league, but only when you are a true lesbian. Winning a fight will bring the contestant a small hand of money, losing will bring a weekend of torture or something other (given from the winner).
The fights are in front of a large audience and will be live on Pay-TV.
Our young but straight heroine tricks herself in the league, taking forbidden drugs to fake that she isn't a lesbian. The entrance test could be something like watching lesbian pictures, while a technical device measures her stimulation and her ability to cum from lesbians hands/tongues etc.
Thinking that she will easy win any fight, she goes to her first competition.
To her great surprise, her opponents are often so cleverly, that she cums earlier (or more often) and lose some fights and go straight to a weekend slavery instead of earning money.
Why should the story play in the future? You could cure some logic errors about female sexuality through future technology or future drugs (for example: it is not very likely that at first two enemies are facing and - at the end - get orgasms from another - OK, I take that back. In a man's world, of course any time). ;-)
The fights should be in the beginning wrestling fights, but due the holds and at the end there should be sexual activities to bring the opponent to orgasm.
The goal of the fights could be different. Examples:
- First fighter who orgasms loses
- The loser is the fighter with the most orgasms in 1 hour
- The fighter who can not continue to fight, because of a sore pussy/to many orgasms etc loses
Because it's boring when every girl looks only pretty (big tits, long legs etc.), there should be a wide range of bodies. There can be skinny, fat, busty, tall, tiny, younger, older girls. Their pussy can be loose,
tight, with long/puffy inner lips, small, etc.
Each or many fighters could also have a special weakness (Achilles' heel). Finding this weakness during the combats will give the fighter a big advantage to bring their opponents in real trouble. These could be face sittings, croth claws, anal, pissing, spankings, fistings etc.
Some of the fighters should be friends, some enemies, some unknown.
The thoughts of our heroine would be as important as the action itsself. Before the fights she could be convinced of herself, but slowly determine that today her opponent is better or she is to weak to hold her orgasm back. She could think about what the weak point of their opponent would be or that her weak point could be detected. It should be a slow process in her mind until she is finally so aroused that she no longer want to fight but only thinks about sex
Each story should usually contain one week; the announcement of the opponent's, the type of combat, her preparation for this battle (training with other girls), the fight itsself and sometimes the slavery weekend.
This is the basic plot I figured out. Has anyone suggestions and improvements to this storyline?
Unfortunately I can not write these stories by myself. On the one hand is English not my main language on the other hand I can not write ;-)
Is there someone here who has an interest to write such stories?
First: I'm sorry for my bad english. I try to make as less mistakes as possible.
What do you think of the following story idea?
In 50 years the economy will be down since a decade. For a young girl without work, it isn't easy to survive.
There is a chance for lesbian women to got a contract in a female sexfighting league, but only when you are a true lesbian. Winning a fight will bring the contestant a small hand of money, losing will bring a weekend of torture or something other (given from the winner).
The fights are in front of a large audience and will be live on Pay-TV.
Our young but straight heroine tricks herself in the league, taking forbidden drugs to fake that she isn't a lesbian. The entrance test could be something like watching lesbian pictures, while a technical device measures her stimulation and her ability to cum from lesbians hands/tongues etc.
Thinking that she will easy win any fight, she goes to her first competition.
To her great surprise, her opponents are often so cleverly, that she cums earlier (or more often) and lose some fights and go straight to a weekend slavery instead of earning money.
Why should the story play in the future? You could cure some logic errors about female sexuality through future technology or future drugs (for example: it is not very likely that at first two enemies are facing and - at the end - get orgasms from another - OK, I take that back. In a man's world, of course any time). ;-)
The fights should be in the beginning wrestling fights, but due the holds and at the end there should be sexual activities to bring the opponent to orgasm.
The goal of the fights could be different. Examples:
- First fighter who orgasms loses
- The loser is the fighter with the most orgasms in 1 hour
- The fighter who can not continue to fight, because of a sore pussy/to many orgasms etc loses
Because it's boring when every girl looks only pretty (big tits, long legs etc.), there should be a wide range of bodies. There can be skinny, fat, busty, tall, tiny, younger, older girls. Their pussy can be loose,
tight, with long/puffy inner lips, small, etc.
Each or many fighters could also have a special weakness (Achilles' heel). Finding this weakness during the combats will give the fighter a big advantage to bring their opponents in real trouble. These could be face sittings, croth claws, anal, pissing, spankings, fistings etc.
Some of the fighters should be friends, some enemies, some unknown.
The thoughts of our heroine would be as important as the action itsself. Before the fights she could be convinced of herself, but slowly determine that today her opponent is better or she is to weak to hold her orgasm back. She could think about what the weak point of their opponent would be or that her weak point could be detected. It should be a slow process in her mind until she is finally so aroused that she no longer want to fight but only thinks about sex
Each story should usually contain one week; the announcement of the opponent's, the type of combat, her preparation for this battle (training with other girls), the fight itsself and sometimes the slavery weekend.
This is the basic plot I figured out. Has anyone suggestions and improvements to this storyline?
Unfortunately I can not write these stories by myself. On the one hand is English not my main language on the other hand I can not write ;-)
Is there someone here who has an interest to write such stories?
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