Would this work?

[pocketrocket]

I am a writer trying to construct a scene. Two lovers are exploring D/s aspects of their personalities but neither is fully one or the other. The male has taken the Dominant role in the past but in this scene, he is submissive. Both parties are aware that the entire scene is being recorded by multiple cameras.

1. They enter a safe place (the female's studio) carrying Thai food.
2. The female directs the male to disrobe and sit in a heavy wooden armchair. She ties his wrists behind the chair back and his ankles together but not to the chair, then blinds him with a sleep mask.
3. She feeds him his entire pad Thai using chopsticks then consumes her garlic chicken with extra sriracha sauce while he listens. Occasional physical contact indicates to the male that both are seated.
4. When she completes her spicy chicken dish, she pushes back the second chair and drops to her knees. She fellates him, using lips and tongue only but with attention to both shaft and balls.
5. At first, he notices nothing unusual but eventually, the peppers in the food start to penetrate the skin of his penis.
6. She finishes the fellatio, bringing him to climax, and attempts to swallow the load and cleans up the bits that got away.
7. Before she releases him or provides any further cleaning, she does several nude stretches on the ballet bar.
8. When she releases the male, he picks her up and carries her into the locker room for some vanilla shower sex.

This scene is for a recently sexual couple who are exploring their relationship. If it matters, they became engaged to be married after only a couple of weeks.
He is a business executive. She is a fitness trainer who also owns the gym. She is more intelligent than he is and both acknowledge it.
How will the use of peppers alter perception?
Are there any simple alterations you would suggest?

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Funny, that this idea did not get anwers.
It is a nice idea, but as a reader some aspects confuse me.

The scene focuses on this encounter, when she is dominant. Needs some background of them switching roles.

Her fellating him is considered a more submissive act, even if he is bound. (she services him) I understand, that it is the way to apply the pepper. But it is contradicting.

How did she become nude and what is the point of her stretching nude if he is blindfolded? What does it add to the story?

Pepper (chilly/ginger) are tunnel games, it works, but the mouth is still more sensitive than penis/pussy. So before his cock starts to burn, her mouth will burn a lot worse.

Being an business executive usually requires some intelligence. Being a fitness trainer doesn't. So establishing that it is otherwise is a distraction.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

My take:

As they arrive with the food, he orders her to strip for him, before she gets food. Initially it appears as if he is dominant as usual and sits down in the chair to watch the show.
She strips and does some lap dancing for him. When she gets behind the chair she suddenly ties him. She pulls down his pants, having him sit there, helpless with erect cock.
He still does think he is in control. She does the stretching very close to him and he can't reach her.
Then she blindfolds him.
He hears as she opens the food. She feeds him a mouthful of the chilly sauce, that really hot.
Suddenly he feels the hot sauce drip onto his cock.
She eats, feeding him too. Every so often she adds sauce to his cock, working it in with her hand. Cock starts burning, handjob gets him edged.
She wants to experience the chilli feeling as well and straddles him.