would this plot be allowed?

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I have an idea for a story -- well, I have ideas for several, but one is causing me some concern. My idea is a man visiting a sex club where he can hire a young woman to service his sexual needs. So far, so normal. But he is shaken when the girl greets him by name and tells him she used to live next door to him.

The point of the story is that he has to decide whether he's still attracted to her after he realizes she is the pig-tailed schoolgirl he remembers from a decade ago.

Now this is my problem. He is not wanting to prey on schoolgirls, nor has he ever felt such a desire. But is it permissible for him to consider a woman as a possible sexual partner if he knew her slightly when she was under age (I am all too aware of how cautious we have to be about things like that).

Suggestions?:confused:
 
I have an idea for a story -- well, I have ideas for several, but one is causing me some concern. My idea is a man visiting a sex club where he can hire a young woman to service his sexual needs. So far, so normal. But he is shaken when the girl greets him by name and tells him she used to live next door to him.

The point of the story is that he has to decide whether he's still attracted to her after he realizes she is the pig-tailed schoolgirl he remembers from a decade ago.

Now this is my problem. He is not wanting to prey on schoolgirls, nor has he ever felt such a desire. But is it permissible for him to consider a woman as a possible sexual partner if he knew her slightly when she was under age (I am all too aware of how cautious we have to be about things like that).

Suggestions?:confused:


I don't see why not. I wrote a series in which several characters were presented as children, and later as adults in sexual situations. As long as the sexual content is confined to them as adults, I don't think you'll have a problem with it.

I would include a note with the submission to explain the situation, otherwise, you're likely to get automatically flagged.
 
I have an idea for a story -- well, I have ideas for several, but one is causing me some concern. My idea is a man visiting a sex club where he can hire a young woman to service his sexual needs. So far, so normal. But he is shaken when the girl greets him by name and tells him she used to live next door to him.

The point of the story is that he has to decide whether he's still attracted to her after he realizes she is the pig-tailed schoolgirl he remembers from a decade ago.

Now this is my problem. He is not wanting to prey on schoolgirls, nor has he ever felt such a desire. But is it permissible for him to consider a woman as a possible sexual partner if he knew her slightly when she was under age (I am all too aware of how cautious we have to be about things like that).

Suggestions?:confused:

As long as you're clear that there was no attraction/etc. while she was under age, and nothing else that reads like sexualising minors (e.g. fantasizing about her as she used to be), that should be fine. I would recommend using the Notes field to explain this, just so you don't get an accidental rejection from a speed-reading mod who sees reference to a "pig-tailed schoolgirl".

You could check out the first chapter of my "Red Scarf" series for an example of what Literotica has accepted previously. It's about two women who first met when one was 16 and the other, aged 23, was tutoring her. They don't get into any kind of sexual relationship until about seven years later, but the childhood backstory is relevant to their later relationship, and most of the first chapter deals with the time when the younger one was under 18. I clarified this in the Notes field, and I didn't have any trouble getting it accepted.
 
yep

Thanks for your helpful advice. That is what I was hoping would be the case, but after some experiences on Facebook that made me sigh, I thought I should check in advance.
 
I have had a mildly similar story go through no issue. I guess there was the alleviating fact that there was no real age gap between the two people who meet.

I am not quite sure what turns him off about the sex worker. Is it just that she knows him or did her pigtails somehow offend him?

Also, I would warn against her dressing her hair on pigtails in the "climax". If you dress her up as she was when she was minor for a sex scene, that might be a bit too much. Even if the point was for him to accept her as she is and was.
 
Simple answer... Yes.

Oh there is no hard or complicated answer. Unless the woman starts relating the crush she had on him back when and she would have back then been willing to... well you get the drift as she goes into very explicit detail. <--- that's a no-no.
 
I see no problem as you depict it. In your summary, he didn't think of her sexually then but does so now. No issues with sex then.
 
Your premise actually has a lot of potential if you handle it with a realistic tone. And, as pointed out, with care not to sexualize her as a youth.

I look forward to reading it.
 
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