Would this be ok?

[Brett315]

The top of the line dog kennel (I need a dog breed that's really expensive. Boxer or pug maybe?) is locked up for the night and everyone has gone home. Around 1:00am, someone breaks in and around 1:15am, another person breaks in (two girls maybe? or two guys? They are unrelated.) They are intent on stealing the dogs as they are worth hundreds of dollars.

The owners, two guys, (two friends) realize that they have forgotten very important papers for a meeting the next day and decide to run to the kennel to get them. They come in just as the two would-be robbers are working on getting the kennel latch open to one of the dogs. The two owners grab them and carry them off to 'the breeding room.' It's small and empty; so that nothing gets in the way of mating

One of the owners grab two collars and two leashes and put them on the robbers. Tieing the leashes around the doorknob, the get one of the robbers on all fours and fuck the shit outta them. Then, they do the same to the other. They leave them be for about 10 minutes, and then come back and fuck them so more before un-tieing them and telling them never to show their faces here again.

What do you think? Any suggestions would be great And no, the dogs don't fuck them, they are only there for the purpose of the robbers to be there.

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

an intriguing story line! though is sex really punishment? lol

rather than 2 different thieves, have them working together, a bit more realistic; and perhaps have them a couple - one guy, one girl. With just 2 girls it is kind of predictable, with 2 guys, you are catering to just a particular audience/orientation. Give a little something for everyone to enjoy. Also, if they really want to fuck the hell out of the two theives - call in some back up - 3 or 4 other guys; gang bang them, rip their asses, cum all over them, humilate them. When you are done with them, don't let them wash up, just get dressed and kick them out into the street, maybe just letting them only partially dress...

Admittedly, not really my kind of story, but one can let the imagination go and play with it a bit.

 

[Brett315]

For not being your kind of story, that's a pretty damn good idea

What if I did a girl and guy like you said, but they are neighbors? Or should I do the couple?

 

[Fantasies_only]

The top of the line dog kennel (I need a dog breed that's really expensive. Boxer or pug maybe?) is locked up for the night and everyone has gone home. Around 1:00am, someone breaks in and around 1:15am, another person breaks in (two girls maybe? or two guys? They are unrelated.) They are intent on stealing the dogs as they are worth hundreds of dollars.

The owners, two guys, (two friends) realize that they have forgotten very important papers for a meeting the next day and decide to run to the kennel to get them. They come in just as the two would-be robbers are working on getting the kennel latch open to one of the dogs. The two owners grab them and carry them off to 'the breeding room.' It's small and empty; so that nothing gets in the way of mating

One of the owners grab two collars and two leashes and put them on the robbers. Tieing the leashes around the doorknob, the get one of the robbers on all fours and fuck the shit outta them. Then, they do the same to the other. They leave them be for about 10 minutes, and then come back and fuck them so more before un-tieing them and telling them never to show their faces here again.

What do you think? Any suggestions would be great And no, the dogs don't fuck them, they are only there for the purpose of the robbers to be there.

This is a general idea which could make a good storyline if there was a story to begin with.
Don't just write in sex just to have sex.
The sex slave fetish comes to mind (dog collars, leashes, bondage, humiliation).
It can be like "Playboy's Sex Court", where the thieves are sentenced to be sex slaves.

As for the breed of dog, make it a racing greyhound that is being transported to the track.
This also makes sense for the motivation of the robbers who have RFID tagged collars (attached to belt under jacket).
The dog owner (animal rights activist) agrees the caught robbers should live like how the dog would have lived (sex is an added bonus, not planned for the dog) which includes wearing a tagged dog collar, tied to uncomfortable places, led around by a leash, electro-shock obedience training, talked down to and humiliated, etc.

 

[subwannabe]

Interesting. At first I didn't know what to think of the whole dog story idea but Fantasies Only had a good idea there about turning it into a forced bdsm scene. Maybe the kennel owners would be female, out for a while, and the thieves both male. The women come home early for some reason and hear noises. Knowing that someone has broken in, they get guns and catch the guys in the act. They know the guys so they really don't want to call the police, but want the guys to pay the price for what they had done. The collars and chains around could be put to good use.