Would love some feedback on what I've written if you don't mind

[RoperTrace]

Honestly, that's probably the best advice I could hope for. If I just keep at writing I'll get better at it, but the lack of comments I get still disturb me.

I'm a little late to this post. Comments seem to (have) grown fewer over my time on Lit. i looked at your list of stories and all are rather short. In my experience with almost 2 million views on my stories, My average number of views per comment was over 10K. On some stories it was only 1000, but on a few others it was 30K+. Ratings didn't seem to affect comments or views. I just try to write what I enjoy, and let it go at that.