R redmoon Virgin Joined Jul 27, 2001 Posts 9 Jul 31, 2001 #1 I wrote my first story a few days ago, and I would love some criticism (have'nt recieved but one so far). It is entitled A Noise in the Night, by me, Redmoon. It is still in the 'new' section. Thanks in advance!
I wrote my first story a few days ago, and I would love some criticism (have'nt recieved but one so far). It is entitled A Noise in the Night, by me, Redmoon. It is still in the 'new' section. Thanks in advance!
Debbie Persnickety slattern Joined Feb 4, 2001 Posts 24,213 Aug 1, 2001 #2 I really liked your story. I rated it a five! Keep up the good work!
