Would love help

[Oedipus_Jeff]

Am writing my first story, it's been a long slow process so far and I'm not close to finished. Would love somebody to read what I've got so far for feedback and notes. This is a Mom/Son story

 

[CiaoSteve]

Can you let us know how long it is?

 

[Oedipus_Jeff]

I'm not 100% sure how many words, but it's less than one page at this point. A handful of paragraphs

 

[chimpers767]

The story

You still want opinions/advice?