This is my first story and I am about 1600 words in. I am just looking to get some feedback on if my writing style is adequate to be posted here and any pointers an established writer might have.
It's a story about a girl who's boyfriend wants to share her, so if that fits your taste I can send it to you and hopefully get some idea of if it would be posted once it's finished.
It's a story about a girl who's boyfriend wants to share her, so if that fits your taste I can send it to you and hopefully get some idea of if it would be posted once it's finished.
